Thursday, October 17, 2013

A Packd Post

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 . . . When you strip it down it is a story about a masochistic albino
 who likes roses and falls in love with he ex-wife's dead grandaughter.

NyBarista and I are going to have to go out for drinks one day. I just pulled that quote from a comment on West Cove.

So why am I bringing up West Cove ?

Because I realized it has a few things in common with American Fairytale. Okay I will stop talking about it but. . . I will post in by next month. If I'm really going to try pantsing this (In the words of Holden Caufield) Sonuvabitch  I can't let myself get to organized.

I recently saw the music video for  T-Swifty's Everything Has Changed and it made me think of a young Lucie and Fierro.


Chapter 11 and 12/13/E


Bonus !

The White Queen

Also,  I searched and found the prologue from that Litany Lane sequel I couldn't write. The one where :

"[The Hallow Eve Ball] took place at Mr. F’s house. Then he and Clara like make out or something and a jealous Victor burns Mr. F’s house down and kidnaps Clara and forces her to be his Queen.  Suddenly Emile and Mr. F are fugitives  and the story starts off in Old City then . . . I had no idea what to do next. I couldn't get past chapter 1.  I didn’t have any stakes or reasons for Victor and Mr. F to be advesareis. I mean yes, there is that whole Spectre thing but it’s not much to go on."

 The White Queen.




30 comments:

  1. This re-experience has just been simply amazing. I love getting into your head and everytime you go into play format, I know I’m about to crack up.

    Lile, I never thought of the research you would have had to do for this. I mean, I would have never thought to look up if there were immigrants in the 1930s. And the fact you took the time to find a state where same sex marriage was legal (although, Emile isn’t married, is he ?)

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    1. Well, originally he was engaged and broke up but this never made it's way into the story. It's odd cause a part of HOF takes place in New Haven and I'm like that place sounds familiar . . .

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  2. This was fun because I got to relive ALL the chills all over again ! I

    If it was all a dream I would have died.

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  3. I thought she called the crystal studded roses tacky because she is so used to Fierro’s fine taste in flowers.

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  4. I would love to go out for drinks, just as soon as I get enough tips to fly out to California. Until then, I’ll have to pretend to do it in my head. *looks at hot male bartender and orders bourbon on the rocks*

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    1. *I'll have a flirtini* *winks at hot batender and then tips 10$*

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    2. Although, I guess I shouldn't have said Albino...that feels slightly mean-spirited.

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  5. *Merlot, please !* *Appreciates hot male bartender, but is also lesbian so....*

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  6. Wait. Emile writes Period-Drama novels ? Awesome.

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  7. You did say in a post you could go back to West Cove, so maybe NAF is it ?

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    1. I did ? I'm not sure about West Cove. I could maybe poke at it for fun.

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  8. So, in the back of my head, Lucie was heir to a cracker and cookie company.

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  9. This is my new favorite slogan: It’s insta-love, bitches

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  10. Ooh, I LOVE that alternate ending to LiLe with the Micheal Buble song ! I need to find and read that again. It was so bittersweet, yet hopeful.

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    1. Yeah,. . about that. I can NOT find that alternate ending. I think it might have gotten deleted. I really like it !

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  11. Seriously, Lile you should write for Lost, you’d be queen with all your plot twists and throwing people off. Will there be more of the "not what you think/tricks" in NAF ?

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    1. There will be NONE of that. Well just one teeny tiny one but mostly it's played straight.

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  12. Aww, that music video is so so so cute ! And then Taylor Swift and Ed Sheerhan at the end was adorable.

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    1. Seriously, why do I think Sheeran is so adorbs ? I mean he totally isn't conventional hot, but I love him.

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  13. I think Sonuvabitch is more in the words of Lily Aldrin

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  14. I love how your muse looks out for us and teh sexy times

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  15. Cutest music video ever ! We need more of this and less women twerking on things !

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  16. The White Queen sounds like it would have been amazing. It seems more edgier and possiblely less confined that HoF

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    1. I had/have no idea how to write that story, feel free to steal !

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Let me know what you think !