Can we talk about how awesome this is in relation to Tomfia and Clierro ? (Yes, I know Mr. F doesn't technically have a job, but that was because I didn't try hard enough to give him one). I just like this. . . this coming from a lady who's been with a tattooed unemployed writer and a Hugo Boss wearing CEO. . at the same time. I should really write a book.
Oliva and Shawna
You guys cannot keep doing this to me. You two are such teases but I'm loving what I'm seeing !
. . . So Obligatory Bellum Update
Okay, guys I'm hunkering down on Bellum II. I really just need to pull it all together . . .but I get distracted. I instead start plotting out Bellum III which has a bunch of odd scraps hanging around. Then I go searching for music. . . then picspiration. . . then I finally get to pulling together. It's close though. . . I can feel it. I used a lot of ellipses.
I guess I want to have the whole thing "tacked together" before I post. I'm to scared to straight up pants but I think think I could. . . I think. I have 7 chapters up. I know what chapter 8 is and I have no idea what happens in 9 or if there is a 10 but I did finish the last chapter a LONG time ago.
TDOLL JNRR, 12K of chapters I actually didn't even need now that I think about it . . .
I tried a thing here where I inverse chapter 8 and 9. These chapters are the same events told from Fierro and Clara's POVs. They were created to help you "play along" with the narrative but I think it really just confuse the plot.
Okay, Mr. F left Clara at the alter. 1. . .2. . . 3
TDOLL CHAPTER 8 (with parts of chapter 9)
TDOLL CHAPTER 9/10 (with parts of chapter 8)
I think facial scars are just writing gold...they’re what gets left behind after something traumatic happens. Also, Sawyer has some (not facial) in UL too.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I feel you on the picspiration distractions I get pulled down the strangest research / inspiration wormholes.
That's right from the Meth lab. Does Luce have any scars ?
Deletea lady who's been with a tattooed unemployed writer and a Hugo Boss wearing CEO. . at the same time.
ReplyDeleteYes, Lils this should totally be a book...except it should be two different dudes and a threesome situation.
Also, what the hell is a snapback ?
I'd buy the hell out of that book
DeleteOooh
Delete@ Erik - It's a hat.
Delete@Jkelley well . . .
@ Olivia J *hacking your computer*
Oh, scared Roaslie makes my heart hurt. SHE JUST NEEDS TO BE LOVED, DAMMIT.
ReplyDeleteI know, I’m like go Papa Fierro and kill Martin !
DeleteI guess that is what is boils out to isn't it ?
Delete“ I’ll beg for your forgiveness later”, he said, Mind you I enjoyed a time when men could hit their wives.”
ReplyDeleteA good comeback would have been “Good thing you stood me up at the wedding, dickface.”
Yes, yes, yes
DeleteHe is joking I swear.
DeleteLol, so not only does Lile Muse get script format but so does a Raggedy Ann Doll and Technically.
ReplyDeleteI do it so you know who is talking. I think "Technically" showed up a few times earlier.
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ReplyDeleteI just don’t get inheritances, I mean how can that NOT end up badly when you have more than one child.
It is very antiquated, but I guess family's trust the one kid to be fair to the rest.
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ReplyDeleteThose Fierro Martins scenes are just so intense !
And how . . . I just wish Clara had been present for some.
DeleteLile, maybe this is meta, but do you think Martin could have ever been good or did his parents completely screw that up for him ? It seems like he could have been decent if Clierro weren't in the picture.
ReplyDeleteAlso, you love Claudia, but I kind of love Derek.
I agree, I think Martin's parents ruined him. I mean they killed someone and covered and up and got married becuase they. . . had to. . . and Roger was a drunk . . . wait.
DeleteDerek is one of those legal types who often forgets to be human. He considered us all more of a formality than a family. Derek’s family's practice had been with my family for decades. He was career-oriented, smart and successful.
ReplyDeleteI mean subsitute career-oriented for job-oriented and successful for competent and that could kind of be Damien...if youu squint.
I mean really it's Isiah...is he in Bellum II or III ?
DeleteI can see this. Also Derek's law firm is the one Paris uses in chapter 8 of Bellum.
Delete"It's a part of the settlement , I forgot to turn it in."
"Is it important ?", she asks poking her head outside the bathroom
"I think so, I think Mr. Locke might still be in his office. I should take it. "
ReplyDeleteEdward Cullen had a Vanquish? Is that the car he gave Bella ? I'm 3 years sober on Twilight.
... I think so ?
Delete*sends good vibes for Bellum II* I can't wait to see what you have in store, that last gif post has me so amped.
ReplyDeleteI spent so long working on it
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