Friday, September 26, 2014

T-DOLL JNRR CHAPTER 6 and 7


the best is yet to come. #fall #fortune {@divaliciousblog}
Who puts a fortune on top of lipstick is beyond me. This quote is for the kids in HMLIS.
I feel like the characters have good times in front of them.
(mostly because they aren't characters
in one of my serials.) I love SV's final note that the kids are alright !
How My Light Is Spent

I can't imagine a more perfect story built on poetry and music. The cozy New England setting with friends, family and maybe even a little of the impossible. Who else other than SV can blend kick ass rock music with poetry ? When we started this adventure I had no idea how much  we'd be following the mystery and laughing at Corrine's wit. I seriously want to steal Corrine and do writerly things to her. I don't think I'll ever look at bridges the same.

With that said I'm so excited for her to get to work on Vice 2. Vice has always inspired me to push the envelope and be a little bit more edgy and gritter. I'd be lying if I said  Sera Grigori wasn't based a little bit on Sara Grace (the initials was actually not intentional) and Saint. I won't even get started on what this mystery project SHV and Olivia J are working on. Hmm. . . .

Bellum II Update
It's coming together !I've got a timeline going and all I have to do is put the segments together and fill them in with a little editing here and cleaning up. Basically I want to have more than half of it semi-polished before I post.

T-DOLL

So , can anyone tell I'm abridigng T-DOLL ? I'm mostly taking out details so that the chapters added together are  only 6-7K. It's probably not noticeable.


Chapter 6  : Mr. Fierro Becomes A Jerk I used the new Yola editor for this one, so the colors are a little crazy.

Chapter 7 : Mr. Fierro becomes such a jerk I try to write Clara a new love interest.


26 comments:

  1. Yeah, I totally did the dancing intimacy in HMLIS at the Hookah bar and at the end of Vice...and well UL. Just UL.

    Also, lol, I misread that top part as saying that quote was from HIMYM...I was like weird reference. You are too sweet !

    PS. I NEED BELLUM II

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    1. I caught on to it in HMLIS and kind of side-eyed !

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  2. I totally just noticed you put abridged in there, I didn’t even notice stuff was missing !

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    1. I just take out parts that aren't needed or sentences I didn't like. There was maybe too much detail.

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  3. Ugh, I forgot how much of a jerkoff Fierro was.

    Why is this at the bottom of the page ?

    #5b0e73

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    1. I updated this with the new editor and I was copying and pasting the "purple" color.

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  4. Oh, speaking of writing young characters, I want to use this platform to say that I am branching my series into a book about my main character’s grandson, the son of my female characters. Next up...children’s books.

    Also...I have a Blackberry Touch. Does that make me evil ?

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  5. I think in Chapter 7 you are referring to the song unchained melody, which is in the movie ghost...

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  6. How about a playboy billionaire-writer ?

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    1. Oh, sorry, I though we were doing oxymorons

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    2. Clearly you’ve never met JaPatt

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    3. He's a bajilloionare, but the others....noooope. We film our commercials in the same dude's basement. And yes, JPatts is totally real and not at all an entity creatred by the government.

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    4. Jpatt ? I just . . . . I can't even

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  7. I missed the Scrubs reference…

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    1. *here we go* Elliot breaks up with Jake (or maybe some other character) becuase she realize he doesn't even know what her favorite wine is.

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  8. Oh, Lile I guess it does look like I left you out in the cold. When SH let’s the cat out of the bag maybe you can jump on board in some way. #hypemachine?

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    1. I wish I could. . . I will find some sort of equal torture

      Muse : Lile, don't you think Bellum III is a bit--

      LiLe : No it's fine. . .tensions need to be high.

      Muse : . . . so many feels though ):

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  9. “After 50 years you begin to hope everyone you knew is dead.”
    50 years ? I felt this way when I got my 20 year high school reunion invite.


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  10. I just don’t hate Fierro here, he is doing and saying what he needs to to survive...

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  11. Why doesn’t Rainer just call the hotel and ask about the wedding ? Does she really need to go to the hotel to see the groom ?

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    1. She has to go for the dramz !

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    2. Because the wedding is that day. There is no reason for the hotel to have his name (although he is probably just staying with Emile) Also Rainer wants to see if he is the man in the picture Juliet drew of the suspects (which he is)

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Let me know what you think !