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We started from the bottom now we're here
I put the blog post and interesting tidbits from each one at the bottom of the chapter, instead of the top.
Unscripted
I started doing something in the process of T-DOLL that made sense in my head but I didn't explain. It was getting pretty lonely with just me commenting so I decided to let my Muse talk to express my frustration. Then I thought I should let Past!LiLe air out her frustration.
To account for my "renactments" I started using script format. So it's arguable the "LiLe "is the past version of me. It was a fun way to put some variation on my commenting
Outlook
I'm going to do chapter 13 (cause it's 10,600 words. HOW ?) and then 14 to the end. Fun fact Chapter 13 without annotations is longer than the 14-Epilogue put together with annotations. *headdesk* .
Cause LiLe Keeps Tabs
Hi, Illia
More so, Hi to Princss A ! You are barley on to something.
- Disabled
- Dead Parent
- Singer/Songwriter parent (eh eh ?)
- Drunk Parent (averted)
- Be really academically successful (averted)
- Have weird friends (kind of )
I will have two updates about American Fairytale in the next few post. I have a few twist but I'll be less secretive but don't ask to much from me ! *is plotting* Hold on !
Chapter 11 and 12
omg *blushes* can't believe you see that ! Well, I can't wait to see how we did with out guesses
ReplyDelete"I just remember looking up cities near New Jersey then blacking out till the next chapter."
ReplyDeleteI get this.
Lol, I'm glad may I ask during which part ?
DeleteLol, pretty much everything after the first chapters of everything. I've been doing some re-reading and I have no recollection of writing a lot of things...mostly Blessed Hearts. I have no recollection of writing that at all.
DeleteI just remember thinking it'd be cool to rewrite a greek myth and looking them up and then next thing I know I wrote a thing.
"It wasn’t that I feared Eric I just respected him."
ReplyDeleteDid you think I was going to ignore this ? Hmm ? Although I don’t get why the revolver -carrying-meth addict is afraid of an MFA student.
I can't wait until we get to the blog post during LL or one of those where you act like you have no idea who Eric is.
He RESPECTS Eric. Like I said I blacked out for most of this one when I wrote it but is Eric an MFA student or are you making up characterizations.
DeleteWell, he is a grad student and I think later you say something about humanities so I put two and two together.
DeleteWait, I’m barely on to something ? What does it mean ? What does it mean ?
ReplyDeleteOkay, one question; did you take out illia and I's comments because we were on to something or because we just happened to be the last to post ?
Maybe there parents are musicians, but like Rock n Roll kind and it’s Cinderella from the prince’s POV.
DeleteI’m thinking gender swapped tale ? There is totally a love story in here. Maybe the gender swapping relays to the feministic themes.
DeleteI pointed you two out for a reason . . .
DeleteHmm, Jayson has no idea who John is, but I'm sure Jason does.
ReplyDelete@ Jason mmmmhmmm
Delete@Lile She steps back a little, shaking out her hair to cover her face, ignoring the two missing buttons on her shirt. Those hazel eyes aren’t so innocent anymore
redheads really are evil.
ahem
ReplyDeleteYeah, but is the MG storyline more or less OOC than the whole cop thing ? I mean I guess it depends is Terry exists in this story.
I feel like Gracelyn is more OOC.
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ReplyDelete“Looking back at the half melted graffiti I can’t remember it anymore.
I hate teenagers.”
So why did he marry one ?
IDK, man it always seems like a good idea at the time
DeleteDo not get her pissed at us again.
DeleteHey, I kept it clean ! I had a lot more jokes about unused merchandise I wanted to make, but didn't because it is wrong and offensive to women.
DeleteLet me posther response for you
Delete*pleads the 5th*
STAHP
DeleteKind of nice to know they are afraid of you though... (;
DeleteI'm so proud of you JB !
DeleteIt’s kind of amazing how many perfect endings there could have been in this. Mine is still the final one !
ReplyDeleteI think with Adam you were test driving the ritzy world in preparation for the other other other thing
ReplyDeleteThis is probably SO TRUE.
DeleteTouch was like alcohol in my family
ReplyDeleteAs a child I thought it was something only the adults did. I know my mother loved me but I could count on one hand the times she’s hugged or kissed me.
I would watch as she sat in my fathers lap, talked and flirted with him and I would become jealous.
Fortunately I wasn’t smart enough then to try and hurt myself to get her attention. But as I got older I learned about a different kind of touch
A bad touch.
The kind after to many drinks and jealous hearts that lead to late night hospital visit and tearful phone calls back home to Lithuania.
I have no idea how I ever became a functional member of society
I thought about all this but I didn’t say
Why did you cross this out, it’s so lyrical !
Oh, I kind of glazed over this section. This is pretty awesome. Did I write that ?
DeleteAlso, something funny comes up about children being jealous of thier parent's spouses in HOF and JNRR (if we ever get there)
So, does Gracelyn know that Thomas has AIDs ? Or does she not get it. Also, I have to say I think this chapter kind of underestimates the intelligence of 16YO girls.
ReplyDeleteUm, I don't know if she does. I'm guessing not.
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ReplyDeleteI’ll ask the question I asked before. Would you ever do a tell all bio or memoir ?
Um, there really isn't much to say. What do you want to know I'll tell you ?
DeleteWait, do people have celebrations for the day they met ? Because I’d like a reason for a party
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DeleteWell, our 2nd wedding anniversary is in like 3 months...
WHAT ? Wow, time flies when you are falling in love everyday ! *logs into evite*
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DeleteI’d say CO is the midwest, if not southeast or northwest or...something
ReplyDeleteI like the script format, it reads as funny to me ! I just had a hard time getting the difference in voice between past!Lile and present!Lile
ReplyDeleteI just want future!Lile .... iz impatient
DeleteIt's coming
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