Challenge !
Recently Shawna and I agreed to switch things up with a little challenge in which I would write a (correct me if I'm wrong) side story to the Veritas series. I choose this because I used to love science fiction when I was teenager. I understand this is cyberpunk so we will see how it goes ! Any advice ?
Je' Ne Regrette Rien I really did not think I would be able to update with how hectic things have been, but after moving into a new house I am finding myself with so much free time, just listening to music.
Picspirations
I though I might give picks for the rest of the DeLune family. I found myself inadvertently choosing certain pictures for a reason.
Clair DeLune (47)
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| Elizabeth Hurley |
Claudia (30) & Derek (28)
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| Victoria Beckham |
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| Zachary Quinto |
Clarice (28) & Colin (35)
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| Lacy Chabert |
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| Jesse Tyler Fergunson |
Rosalie (4) & Clara (26) and Mr. Fierro
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| Suri Cruise* |
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| Katie Holmes |
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| Kevin Zegers |
Formatting that last one took me almost 30 minutes
* I feel bad for posting a picture of her, but her outfit is perfect.
Andover House
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| Pink House in New York |
I don't have one for Martin DeLune yet
Chapter 3
Rainer is accusing Clara, Clara is accusing Mr. Fierro, Mr. Fierro is accusing Clara, Juliet is accusing everyone and why do they keep mentioning Thanksgiving ?
Playlist
+1+ - The Word Spins Madly On - The Weepies
+2+ She is The Sunlight - Trading Yesterday
+3+ TIme Lapse Lifeline - Maria Taylor
Chapter 3
I loved how you used the weepies song. The first lyrics work so well with Clara.
ReplyDeleteI have no advice for our little "challenge" but, I do have the plot for what I am writing for you. I think side story is a good word or it. I was going to call it . . . . fanfiction.
But, seriously hon-- take any measures you want.
I love the photos, it will take a while to memorize all the face. But,OMG katie holmes you are so HBIC but, why does your baby wear heels ?!
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ReplyDeleteIknorite ? It will make it harder for them to run away when Tom Cruise looses his mind.
Lovely chapter but, why no double chapter post !!! grr . . . jk.
ReplyDeleteAre you going to tell us the reasons why you chose certain photos. Elizabeth Hurley looks might shopped.
Why does Mr.Fierro have an office. I mean what does he do ? I'm just wondering if he interacts with other people often.
ReplyDeleteI think the killer is the man in the photo with Emile. I’m just calling it now.
ReplyDeleteasked Mr. Fierro not to smoke in the car which he thoughtfully ignored.
ReplyDeleteFor some reason I found this incredibly funny.
I love the pictures, they really help. Was there ever a picspiration for Mr. Essex ?
ReplyDeleteThat house is gorgeous, It looks like the house on Sabrina the Teenage Witch.
ReplyDeleteAlso, you could have made your title it’s Fry Day!
Are we ever going to get a blog post talking about Clara as a mother ?
ReplyDeleteI think she is a sh*t mother for leaving her child for 6 months with no good reason. No matter how well she knows Mr. Fierro, it is weird for her to leave rose with a man who is a stranger to her.
I mean in DSI Clara seemed to be more of an advocate for her daughter. I feel like Clara sees her daughter as just being this thing in her life not someone who is her life.
*/end rant
The last scene was magical with the music and imagery. I could totally see it happening in like a movie or something. Is Juliet in High school or college ?
ReplyDeleteI have an idea for you Shawna. Write a story where Clara dies, Mr. Fierro and Emile become life partners and raise rose . . . no ? . . .okay.
ReplyDeleteWhen Clara said "my loving father" was she being saracstic ? Her dad was kind of a jerk
ReplyDeleteAww, the pool scene reminded me of the scene in LL . . . all those years ago it seems like.
ReplyDeleteWhy was everyone at the dinner table wearing black ? That seemed really creepy. Were they being respectful.
ReplyDeleteOn Heidi's note I feel like Clara is afraid to confront her daughter or start a petty fight. She does seem to shrug a lot of things off.
ReplyDeleteI guess we have to remember that Clara & Fierro don't know that Rainer has 7 other suspects aside from the two of them.
ReplyDeleteI think someone is framing Fierro.
Fierro and Clara don't seem to get along too well. For 2 people who will have to spend forever together they aren't getting off to a good start.
ReplyDeleteSo,we see Mr.Fierro with his flowers, will we see Clara with her piano ?
ReplyDeleteI think the reason Clara is so turned off by perfection is because she isn't "perfect" with the scars on her face. And piano is all about perfection.
ReplyDeleteI was foolish enough to believe we would get some answers but, all we have are more questions ! What is with Rose and the puncture marks.
ReplyDeleteI liked the Essex scene--it showed them getting out of the house and about the other characters. I would have never known you only wrote it to write Essex again.
ReplyDeleteNGL, I did awwww at Mr.Fierro calling Rose angel. Although, I am sure he did it so, she wouldn't be afraid of him.
ReplyDeleteWow, I just remembered Rose is short for Rosalie. Does Clara always call her Rosalie in her POVs
ReplyDeleteI love the mystery aspect, it reminds me of Pretty Little Liars. I am going to go with Tabbi and say none of the 9 suspects are actually the killer.
ReplyDeleteIs there a reason one sister married someone younger and the other someone who was much older or are those the ages of the actual actors ?
ReplyDeleteHow did Mr.Fierro not hear Clara swimming in the pool towards him ? Also, why do they have an indoor pool ?
ReplyDeleteDid Fierro like, vow not to go back to America after he left or something. The only way I see this playing out is if they both go back to New York City.
ReplyDeleteAssuming Julie isn't an evil character or anything I would love to see a series about her and her psychic powers. It was cool seeing how she got her *visions.
ReplyDeleteI was hoping for more ABWG too, the last chapter you posted was amazing ! Can we assume we wont finish ABWG until RJNN is finished ?
ReplyDeleteIdk what it is but, Zegers looks so much older in that pic than he really is.
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ReplyDelete@ Shawna - Thanks Honey, It would be nice to write a little adventure story. I love the grittness !
@ Ashlyn - LOL
@ Erik - ERIK !
@ June - It's hard finding a photo of her when she isn't.
@ July - I've settled that he makes money on the stock market and you are write he doesn't interact with other people alot.
@ Tabbi - Just so you know the man in the photo is Emile's partner. I sort of implied it.
@ Quinn - Really ? I've always been told my humor is a little off. .. something about execution
@ sugarcookie - Still thinking
@ Trish - gotta get down on friday ! Not gonna lie my kids love that song !
@ Hiedi - Interesting you mention this
@ Illia - Senior in High School
@ Nybarista - Love it, lol
@ Hpgirl - Yes and no
@ Selena - Right ?
@ Carleigh - You wear black when you are in mourning and Mr. Fierro and Rose wouldn't really mourn Martin. I like to think he is messing with her.
@ Topaz - Intersting you notice that
@ Rei - That's right they don't know.
@ AngelicSpirit - Exaclty, but then again they haven't been together for 3 years
@ Cerie - Yes.
@ loserlikeme - yes, yes,yes
@ Princessa - Sure I'll tell you . . . jk !
@ Daisy - I know it's so weird, I just did.
@ peacegoddess - I can see that
@ Harper - I think naming her Rosalie was because her nickname could be Rose. I think it goes back and forth but when she is angry she calls her Rosalie.
@ Shawna - In response to the above does it matter between Minnie and Minnow ?
@ appletini - Well we don't know who number 8 or 9 are.
@ Carter - No, I choose those ages for a reason.
@ Holli - I think he knew she was there. Also it's for exercise !
@ Cherry - He just doesn't want to, but at the end of the chapter he pretty much agrees to go back
@ Lana - Ahh an orgins story
@ Holliday - I don't know. ABWG is much more linear than JNRR. I might just post inbetween.
@ Sara - I like his complacent expression.