Wednesday, September 23, 2009

What comes next

Okay, so as promised here is the next chapter, now this chapter I think takes something I've used a lot and put it slightly into context, it's very minor. I also did something that I expect to take a lot of slack for but as always I'm a little nervous but here goes.



Playlist



Part I & II



These Boots Are made for walking - Jessica Simpson



Part II



Stranger - Secondhand Serenade

Someday - Nickleback




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Also, I won't answer comments in this post but in another post I'll post later on.



Sick & Twisted





38 comments:

  1. This was my favorite chapter ever I am so addicted again. This was lovely.

    FIRST ! ! !

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  2. Kill Sofia

    Kill Tomas

    Let Tomas get Severine Pregnant

    Make it a Dream

    Blow up New York City

    But do not let them move to New Jersey !

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  3. This chapter was very emotional for me I literally felt every emotion even the sassiness (as I call it)of Severine. I really loved this chapter also.

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  4. Another great, ending Linda I am totally sitting here finding meaning in it and I have to be at school in the morning. I too am totally addicted to this.

    Although I hate the JS version of "These Boots"

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  5. One of your characters names is Julia ? Is that another slip ? Is that what you are going to take slack for ?

    I really like this chapter too. I couldn't believe the Stranger was a real song, it fit the story perfectly. You are doing so good. I know I said we shouldn't acknowlegde it but, it's creepy how our stories are taking similar routes, some you are not even aware of.

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  6. Does Severine not like Tomas for the reasons she said or because Tomas didn't pick her ? I mean she did try to do him.

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  7. Okay, someone said it last time I totally think Adam is a prince, he totally, totally is. I am seconded that calling.

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  8. Another beautiful ending !

    Is it hard for you to make the endings ?

    Is their any greater significance in the ending ? I feel like I don't understand the last line.

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  9. Oh, also in United Light, Brad's origininal name was Derek but I changed it because I think of Derek as a name for handsome young men (Derek from Swan Princess, Derek Hough . . . ).

    ... I may have had on wine cooler tonight.

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  10. ^^
    Never let friends, drink and type.

    I hate when you leave subtle hints about something you did but, I will go ahead and guess. You've talked about Sofia beinf affected by her rape in tiny ways but, now you've put it in a more emotional way. I have no clue.

    Also I think when you said you will get slack for something it's either Sofia's need to clean or Sofia apologizing to Tomas instead of the other way around.

    You pulled some heartstrings, Linda

    When I wrote that I was actually talking about the book.

    Judging by the tattoo and--even though I have no clue why anyone would carry something as big as a revolver around-- the gun. I would say you are trying to make me lose 100$.

    Oh well, I will take what I can get.

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  11. ^^
    I find it interesting that Tomas and Sofia have set up those rules but, they don't seem to be keeping up with them.I'm just afraid what will happen when Tomas meets Adam. Oh, wait I think you are going to pull a Sixth Sense . . . wait, can I call that ?

    So, his brother's SO name is Julia. With a J, right ?

    That's another 10 points, which is great because the Sarah Conner Chronicles 3rd season and the first season of Castle comes out this week.

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  12. ^^ ^^^

    You guys ARE idiots

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  13. Stuff like Sofia thinking Tomas had the dead cat are moments that make me want to look up and see the scene taking place in my office, er I mean living room, lol ! Just the way it was written was so fantastic. I usually am not a commenter but I had to come and speak out.

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  14. His brother's name is Amadaeus, that is timeless. Is their a story behind it.I love Adam's family, they are funny and sweet. I read the song before listening and it was just as I imagined, I love this chapter.

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  15. Sofia said Heath Ledger makes clothes, I was ROFL that is so funny to me.

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  16. How come Severine didn't get a James Bond joke ? Is the bar a real place, it sounds nice.

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  17. You have me so torn, I mean I want to know more about Adam but I like Tomfia. But, I feel like with the ADC he is going to die quicker. I am afraid he is going to die in Lithuania

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  18. I feel like it's both liberating and fun that Tomas is living his dream with his business and all but, as the above said has he considered who will take over if he dies. I doubt he had health insurance pre-AIDS and now it must be sky high.

    I guess, Kasey gets it.

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  19. it's strange that Tomas and Sofia are married but, they don't know about Adam or Terry. I tell my husband everything, he knows all the women I work with even though he has never met them,lol.

    Why are they hiding

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  20. I feel like I should reserve all opinions until the series is over. I feel like everytime I want this to be over you pull me back in with a moment or scene that makes me want it to go on forever.

    I just want to show some love because I feel like I can't make a comment without feeling like it will be off base or something. Or me seeing something out of nothing

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  21. I'm surprised no one has mentioned the Derek-Sofia scene.

    I found that very emotional too. I actually felt her pain, I was right there fighting with her. I myself love reading and having intellectual conversation that is civilized but, I wish Tomas raped him with that revolver. I hate men, no people like that so much.

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  22. ^^

    You have +1 on that comment, Heidi.

    So, Roberts is his last name so he said I'll just want to be called Robert . . . who does that ? That is either cute or funny. Unless it's a British thing.

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  23. I am Adam/Sofia all the way. I feel so bad for Adam because if he like Sofia and he sang that song for her, he must be hurting so much.

    Is their more meaning behind the 1$ bill Severine gives him. I mean it's just a dollar but, from her.

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  24. Was Tomas pulling a practical joke with the cat ?

    I liked this chapter I can't wait to continue the journey.

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  25. I don't usually comment but, I was reading this in my doctors office and I have to say you have set the bar so high with this. It was really nice.

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  26. Um, won't Tomas die from eating that much lipstick ? I thought that was a little odd.

    I have a billion questions but, I'm sure you will answer them soon.

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  27. I feel like they can't catch a break, it is just so tragic. I am glad Tomas helped her, like even though he was sick, he got over it to protect her.

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  28. I just need more. That is it. Is the double spacing a new thing ?

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  29. I'm sure you will answer this late but, why does Tomas call Sofia, SofytÄ—. Also, is their an accent in Tomas's name so it is actually

    toMAS and not TOmas

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  30. I think Tomas killed Derek, like shot him using some fancy Lithuanian Military Silencer style of shooting. He would have shot him and I'd be okay with it.

    I can't imagine walking around with such bad bruises.

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  31. Srsly, Linda if you have the real Tomas locked away somewhere I will hunt you down. I need a foreign man who will kill a guy for me.

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  32. I am finding meaning in everything from their book choices to the names,it is killing me. I mean Adam carries a guitar but, plays the piano does it mean anything ?

    *brain implodes*

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  33. Pets have known to help cure people or make them live better maybe, Tomas will learn to like Charleston

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  34. I am super concerened for Tomas' mother. I have always known domestic violence was bad but when you have something like Sofia's injuries it just cracks up my heart. I think Sofia should go look for her.

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  35. It's odd, I didn't percieve him wiping his eye as crying until I read this for the 3rd time ( I admit it). Tomas really is a sensitive guy and with all the drugs you forget that. Just my thoughts

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  36. I really like Severine's passage. She has always come off as one dimensional but then in one paragraph I just got her. It all clicked.

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  37. This was my favorite too, it was riddled with some good quotes. I think some people will give you slack for TomFia never doing Christamas or V-day together but, I think they have more important things to do.

    I need another update, like now.

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  38. I see how the last chapter was the set up if you will, this chapter was all kinds of magnificent, I will say the last was not my favorite. I just want to see what happens next.

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