I was attempting to put my playlist in the sidebar and ruined my old layout, I can't remember what website I got it from so while I'm trying to find it I'm just going to use this layout. The gray is only temporary.
Speaking of playlist, I didn't understand why Shawna was telling me about arranging the tracks when I realized that it must be easier if the songs at the top of the playlist go with the chapter instead of having the entire playlist in novel order, does that make sense ? So the songs from Chapter one will be at the bottom.
I want to thank you all for your response to the second chapter, it's always good to have an outside opinion. I feel like I should say this and I think maybe a few people will get it but I am not trying to shove people from my Real Life into this, no matter how it may seem, at least I'm not trying to.
I do one unrealistic thing in this chapter that is minor, but someone might notice or notice other unrealistic things I do that I didn't. I also made the font black, to see if it reads better.
Posting this chapter is a little sad because remember those 10,000 words I had ? This is the last chunk of it, but don't I still have alot more to say. I have always been a big music lover it was a large part of my life and I'm glad I get to share it all with you so here is the playlist
Music :
Part I. Over My Head - The Fray (I'm using this song again)
Part II. Always Midnight - Pat Monohan (This wasn't my first choice but I'm sure someone will call me out on it)
I think that's all have to say
Chapter 3 : English, Actually
Ahh- the layout just changed on me when I pressed add comment. Cool
ReplyDeleteI like this chapter, having AIDS must be so hard, I can't believe people still get it.
If he has such a bad disease, why is he still smoking pot ? I hate that.
ReplyDeleteI love all the artists in this story.
ReplyDeleteSo, Eric was the guy whose name Tomas couldn't remember and Maddy was the girlfriend ?
ReplyDeleteI really do not like Tomas. He is a selfish idiot. Team Adam FTW
ReplyDeletePeople compare us a lot but, I think we work differently. I communicate a lot through dialouge which is why mine tend to be longer and you write with more prose.
ReplyDeleteI thought this was a very lovely DITL kind of section.
Why is Tomas suddenly using terms like honey and I think sweetheart.
ReplyDeleteDoes it mean something ?
Was the unrealistic thing that she paid for the membership when she has more important things to buy ?
ReplyDeleteI hate to say it but . . . . I like Adam better than Tomas. I feel like Tomas and Sofia have thay young love and it is all physical with them but, they are both suffering.
ReplyDeleteI think Adam can help her get everything she deserves.
I love how the cat has it's own personality
ReplyDeleteI forgot to mention. What I was telling you before was irrelevant. I thought you were rearranging tracks you had "downloaded" in the wrong order or something.
ReplyDeleteSo . . . You're real life could be in here even if it's unintentional on your part ? Is that what you are saying ?
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ReplyDeleteI think Miss Leigh's real life could be in here but, mostly it is influences. But, I think some people influence her more than others. So if it seems like it is one person it really is another person.
I mean I think if a person writes a certain amount of books inspired by a certain that person would do the same thing but, maybe I'm crazy.
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ReplyDeleteYou're kidding me right ?
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ReplyDeleteDear Lord, you idiots you aren't in it. Deal with it.
Wonderful chapter, Linda ;)
Tomas and Sawyer from United Light need to go to Tool Academy and then DIAF or something.
ReplyDeleteWhat is help code for ? I really don't think it is safe what Tomas is doing working with AIDS. Why can't he start a Casket Painting business ? He could be on the Today Show
ReplyDeleteSofia's going to get pregnant, I'm calling it.
ReplyDeleteI'm just putting it out there, I could be wrong.
I like Adam, I think Tomas will hurt Sofia too. From everything he does from the drugs, when he dies, I think it would be a mercy killing if he ended their relationship
ReplyDeleteOnce again, a lovely chapter in this beautiful love saga. It makes me well up that Sofia is going to loose her husband when she also lost her mother. I think whatever Adam turns into he will be good for you.
ReplyDeleteMy life will have less meaning when this story is over.
Is the thing you messed up on about the UN ? Is England being in the UN ?
And you know what one more thing,
ReplyDeleteEnglish people=British People
It's like me calling you an American and you say no Californian, actually.
English People= England
British people= Ireland, Wales and England.
Unless of course I am in the story in which case ignore everything I wrote.
If I were Sofia I would move in with Servine. They should both move in with her, nothing is worth living like crap when you don't have to.
ReplyDeleteMaybe, I'm spoiled.
The sex scene was surprsisingly tame. I feel bad for Sofia.
ReplyDeleteHow did he not loose his erection after she started crying ? I'm not really asking but, I imagined that happended
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ReplyDelete@Shawna - Oh, I see
@ Jason - I'm saying it's in my super-subconsious
@ Joseph - No one is anyone except themselves.
@ Liz- thanks x2
@ Carli - LOL
@ Peacegoddess - It is safe what he is doing, AIDS/HIV patients should't be afraid to live thier lives. I think if he did go into the casket business it would be depressing.
@ Ashlyn - Okay, you wrote it here first
@ Southern_belle - have I told you that I like your username ?
Tomas has a hard decision ahead of him that is such a good question. Do you live miserably or Die Happy ?
ReplyDeleteI don't know what the answer is.
No wonder you used Over My Head twice
This web serial is poetic
Is Tomas having a stroke or is he just stupid ? Why does he keep forgetting all the stuff the doctor said.
ReplyDeleteThis story poses so many tough circumstances. I really like this. I can't wait for an update, I'll say it.
ReplyDeleteI want an update !
I need an update too ! I'm an Art History major too
ReplyDeleteNursing to Art History is a huge 180. I really hope everything works out. This serial really inspires me but, I think by Fall 2009 Tomas is most likely some body in the ground.
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ReplyDelete@ Violeta - It's the U.N, United Nations. *headesk* Thank you for the comment
@ Jason - I'm sorry, he is from England and considers himself English. Like some Americans like to called Southern or Bostonians.
@ Rori - if you are so am I
@ Same_l - I felt the same way
@ Overmyhead - His eyes were closed
**** the unrealistic thing was that at most Starbucks when you order coffee or tea they hand it to you at the counter. Also at most Starbucks the sugar is not on the table.
ReplyDelete@ Heidi- I don't know either
@ afrayednot - It will come up later.
@ Topaz - I'm working on it
@ Dakota - (:
@ Lily_Florist - It's a 180 for a reason.
@ Jason - I'm sorry, he is from England and considers himself English. Like some Americans like to called Southern or Bostonians.
ReplyDelete-- And you guys wonder why everyone hates you.
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry honey, I'll change it
No, sweetie, don't change anything on account of me. I mean it's your story. Unless you are changing it because it is something I would never say,
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