Monday, January 3, 2022

Keep On Rolling : AYC 12


Chapter 11 pt 2

For a long time I tried to force both parts of this together into one big "Carrie" chapter but I think it works split. I don't have to much to say except parts from this chapter may come up again.

Big Chapter Energy

One SHV post that I hold dear is where she talked about killing your darlings and I'll be honest--I could have killed this chapter...or at least dismembered it.  It provides additional background on Paris/Seraphina and connects to the larger plot but...I could have snipped.

Speaking of SHV, I have been doing a re-read and I always applaud SHV's research. I got to the part in Years where she looked up Ceasars Palace's room service menu and I was like :

I'm waaay to lazy.

I'm literally out here making small things up. This came to bite me in this chapter because of my not-so-great knowledge of Upstate NY, but I fixed it.

This is a big one so let's hop to it


AYC 12

Paris is reeling from his break-up with Carrie but he has 18 months left in law school and plans to make it his best.

Chapter 12

Playlist

 +1+ Darling - Rothwell

 +2+ Girl Like Me - Shakira

+3+ Painting Grays - Emmit Fenn

+4+ Such A Whore -JVLA

+5+ Sign of The Times - Harry Styles

+6+ Thunder - Fink's Mood (This is a good song for Paris, actually)

+7+ Chains - Sweeplings