Here we go...
So, I finished about 60% of Aren't You Cold in December 2020. The entire things was a super rough draft. I figured I could coast and just edit and post as I went.
Didn't quite go that way...
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Whenever I write Seraphina siting in Paris' lap this is what I'm picturing. |
So I originally started this post in August. At that point Chapter 11 still needed a massive edit, but I figured I could finish it quickly but
Mostly because the chapter was 18K and also because the entire serial felt daunting. I had so much to go through and parse out . It got to the point where I realized I only had one option left.
So I did. I completed the entire serial and separated it into chapters. All the dialogue and scenes have been filled out. It just needs editing. Six chapters are in the 'final edit" stage and just need to be shined up. The rest need line and tense edits. I think the hardest part will be the music-inspiration since I let that fall by the side.
Hopefully I'll be on a roll with posting...hopefully
What Else ?
I was so ready to post this in Spring that I actually had already set up a new Pinterest Board for Seraphina's Condo.
I've also been living on stealing SHV's playlists and re-reading Years for inspiration.
This is a massive chapter so let's hop to it.
First,
Chapter 11 (Part 1)
Chapter 10 detailed how Paris and Sera got their start in the sex industry and started a BDSM business. in order to make ends met. To quickly pay back their investors Sera starts working as a high-end escort.
Chapter 10 also shows how stressful their relationship can be and how dedicated they are to each other.
Now we are going to see what happens when they decided to have a little fun
This chapter starts off seven months after the end of chapter 10. Then it rewinds a bit.
Friendly Reminder, it's 2015. Chapter 11 (Part 1)
+1+ - Red Bone -Childish Gambino
+2+
This Is What It Feels Like - BANKS
Sucker For Pain
+3+ Final Song - MO
+4+ When The Party's Over - Billie Ellish
