Saturday, March 15, 2014

Wrap Up DSI T-DOLL


VICE
So once again we say farewell (for now) to the enigma who is Alan Gray and the group of misfits he finds himself thrown together with. I swear I could read this same set up over and over again and love it each time. Vice has such a way with world-building that I will never posses and why most of my stories take place in the same state. Okay. . . where is HMLIS ?  Oh, HMLIS I'm glad you are finally here. Can't wait to see what kind of tale you weave.

OHG ?

So SH has been stirring things up about OHG and I saw this that totally reminded me of On Higher Ground 
http://militarysoconfessions.tumblr.com/post/79511851095/confession-929-i-hate-the-fact-that-i-have 

and this one
http://militarysoconfessions.tumblr.com/post/79503857509/confession-925-it-sounds-bad-but-i-hate-when 

I feel like these sentiments would be so different if we were at peace. 

SO, HOW IS NAF GOING ?

You do not want to know. End of story.



T-DOLL DSI, ABRIDGED 

DSI 13

DSI 14/15

DSI 16/17/E


FLASH FICTION : NAMELESS
So once you finish T-DOLL, I invite you to read this little flash fiction that is not from the vault but from my secret headspace where I keep things.
Nameless

42 comments:

  1. Wow, okay, Lile, I just have to ask...how in the internet did you end up on military confessions ? I had no idea this was a thing, I may have to go on it for *ideas*

    Also, oooh….that Paradox line….I’ve stomped on it pretty hard.

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  2. In chapter 13 of the TDOLL Clara says they are driving to “getting perspective” isn’t that a S&A thing too ?

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  3. I loled like crazy at this with all the Tomas interruption, but I still have to know..how NAF is going ?

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    1. I need to know too, that cliffhanger was so insane ! I want to know about the changeling...did we get a name on her ?

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    2. And I just have to know how Cillian is going to move on after all this...like, how does it end ?

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    3. Technically, April is the changeling (the Fae who replaced a human)

      The human who was taken back to the Fae Cour ? Her name is Penelope. Many of you noted her name does not start with a "T"

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  4. I love how Tomas is starting a beef with Fierro, but in the one non-cannon time they meet all they do is have a conversation..I'd like to see some Tomas/Fierro fisticuff

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  5. OMG, LILE that last joke in the epilouge about coming to terms... what a way to get shit past the nonexistent metaphorical radar.

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    1. Yes, that was CPShawna kind of funny (:

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    2. Well, Erik made a smiliar joke in Sundays and I had already done it and taken it out cause I thought it wasn't classy, but after seeing him do it I did it.

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  6. You legit had to watch Nanny 911 to see misbehaved kids. Couldn’t you just...I don’t know….go to your house ?

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  7. Lile, I love when you use song lyrics ! That moment when you used Backstreet Boys or Nysnc or something in S&A was like a crowing moment of awesome.

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  8. You know….um, couldn’t Clierro like, IDK... hunt down a rapist or fugitive and just kill them or something ?

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    1. They had a limited time frame and Victor wasn't going to let them off that easily. He needs them to be as miserable as he is because they are the reason he is a Spectre when it's the one thing he tried to avoid in LL.

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  9. It’s kind of funny that Victor is all cool with having a girl’s body. But also kind of…forward thinking.

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    1. It was supposed to be Rule of Creepy as well. I don't know maybe Victor has repressed feelings.

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  10. Nameless...just..shaking and crying. Also, in my head Anna is like Anna from Downton Abbey.

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    1. Sure, she's not Anna from the "Quick-I-need-a-generic-name" school of writing.

      No, I actually got that later but I like the name so much and I see her as similar to Anna

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  11. "For being the unbreakable, constant and beautiful love of my life. I was such a fool to think I knew true love until this very second.
    This needs to be in a wedding somewhere. Or like a 50th wedding anniversary speech.

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    1. I could have shortened this to BURN ! Lucie.

      But. . . who said this was married people talking ?

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  12. Shit gets real on military SO confessions...I’m not sure how to feel about it. Or if I should feel about it, but I'm sure some people troll it.


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    1. I think feeling can go both ways on this. It is hard not to feel about it.

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  13. COME ONE LILE, NAMELESS TOTALLY SETS UP FOR A SEQUEL ! THINK OF ALL THE TIMES YOU CAN USE CORPOREAL ! ! ! (;

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    1. Yeah...yeah….Clierro could like try and gather all the spectres on earth and they could like all work together and stuff.

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    2. Ashlyn - I don't want to have a direct-to-video Disney sequel type situation on my hands.

      Mrs. Four - This was supposed to be the plot of HOF, but once again it's not authentic to me to have the characters solve "BIG WORLD" problems. They would have to find something that happens on a smaller scale.

      If I have any insights I will let you know.

      Look at me, sounding all writerly using words like authentic.

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  14. In your head, how did they hide what was going on with their family in Nameless ? Clierro didn’t age, right ?

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    1. Right, so they didn't age. The only person who really has to hide here is Clara, so to make it easier she moves.

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  15. I can’t believe we’ve (well, Lile really) has nearly TDOLLED everything. I’m going to miss this.

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  16. I can definitely see the prince theme, Adam sounds like a prince, Paris is a prince, and Cillian is kind of a prince in Cascade Falls since his Dad was king.

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    1. Funny you caught on to this. Cillian's last name was orginally Prince for that very reason. Then I was like he needs to be Irish because of the Irish Folklore involved. So I was going to make his nickname Prince but then I thought Prince and Princess as nicknames was a little to much.

      Does Adam sound like a Prince ?

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  17. So..what can we do for some S&A flashfiction...I’m just saying.

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    1. I's been so long and I don't have really have anything. I don't have any ideas to bounce off. What do you want to see ?

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  18. I never realized how heartbreaking (and..confusing ?) this story was. I am SO glad Emile survived through it.

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    1. I really liked Emile and he survived so I could write a scene for him in JNRR that never showed up. More on this later.

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  19. I’m afraid to Google...what is a caul ?

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    1. It's when a baby is born with a sack over their face, so it looks like they don't have a face. In olden times this meant your kid was a witch or demon or something.

      It's not a big deal and happens all the time.

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  20. I'll blog about this later but I'm working well on it.

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Let me know what you think !