Thursday, March 8, 2012

And The Plot Thickens


When I started this I really wanted JNRR to be a linear story but once again I relied on my out of order story telling, so I hope it lays out. The trick I suppose is that chapter 8 and 9 are the same events told from a differnt perspective.

I think if you read chapter 9 and then 8 it helps put it into context a lot of Claudia's actions.

Chapter 10

Chapter 10 will help meld everything together and might throw a slight wrench in some theories, After this I promise no more questions will be asked.


Music
+1+ - Who You Are - Jesse J
+2+ Apologize - Lifehouse
+3+ Heartless - William Fitzsimmons


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While Clara's family bickered about wills, divorces and inheritance. Claudia and Mr. Fierro had plotted to murder Martin all to the tune of 65 million dollars. But when Martin becomes suspicious of Mr. Fierro he takes actions into his own hands.


Fierro's certain somethings gone wrong. He may have poisoned Martin DeLune but it certainly didn't kill him. Thank goodness he can blackmail his new bride


Chapter 10

62 comments:

  1. Oh, Lile that had me on the edge of my seat. It just seems to get better and better. I can only imagine how fractured the Delune family will be afterwards.

    Also,I love out of order story telling ! It makes the story so much more dramatic.

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    1. Ahh ! my playlis mixed up

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      +1+ - Who You Are - Jessie J
      +2+ - Sweet Prince - Placebo
      +3+ - Apologize
      +4+ - Heartless

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  2. I loved your previously on . . . thing. Glee should totally hire you to write theirs.

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  3. I love how Fierro’s life is like “Damn it, I didn’t kill my father in law. Oh, well I can just blackmail my new wife. . .oh, honey ?”

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  4. This is random, but I think it’s a good observation that people give the silent treatment to retain some sense of control. Never thought of it that way . . .

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  5. I love Jessie J. Her voice is amazing. Also, I call the days when I feel like crawling in bed with Merlot Monday.

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    1. For me it’s any day that ends in Y

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    2. It took me a while but I came around to her voice.

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  6. Why the hell would she drink Vodka after cutting herself ? It stings ! It’s like she’s never seen Royal Pains

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    1. She doesn't want to get an infection/wants an excuse to kick back Vodka

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  7. No, the treadmarks in the flower bed will point back to them ! ! !

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  8. I know this is bad, but if I did a crime I’d totes want the law firm of Derek and Claudia on my side. They'll do whatever it takes to get sh*t done.

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    1. They would. Little joke Derek's law firm is called Locke and Key

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  9. “It’s pretty”, she said her voice sounded distant. I shuddered thinking of the times Rosalie had taken and hidden my jewelry, clothes and keys never to be seen again.

    What is this referring to ?

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    1. Nothing specific. I just wanted to acknowledge the "tense" relationship Clara and Rosalie have.

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  10. Fierro is such as jerkass. You take that necklace, Clara !

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  11. I am in love with Juliet’s parts. She needs her own serial.

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  12. So, this chapter leaves me confused. What happened after Fierro left Mr. Delune ? Is it ever stated ? Why does she have the vial ? And when did she take it ? Didn’t Fierro give it to Claudia ?

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    1. You asked ALL the right questions ! ! ! ! Except for the last one. He let Claudia hold the vial but when he isn't looking she takes it.

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  13. Is it ever mentioned earlier Claudia wants a divorce ?

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    1. She tells Mr. Fierro this in chapter 9

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    2. She isn't planning on sharing her half of the money with him

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  14. The picture of the girl by the window is so perfect it could be the poster ! I think it highlights the series perfectly.

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  15. The description of the picture of Clara makes me wonder if Mr. Fierro even shows up on film. It’s be really funny if they didn’t show up on film. And by funny I mean weird and creepy/
    I bet Derek has jerk nails.

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    1. Oh, he does show up in film. I think all my male characters have jerk nails. Sorry guys

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  16. Okay, why does Rose think Clara did something to get Fierro aressted. Is she just really intuitive or something ?

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    1. Gurl, where have you been the whole series ? lol ! (:

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  17. I think Joy is up to something. I think she like Fierro or something. I mean why is she pressing and pouring his coffee ? Seems a little cozy.

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  18. I love how Juliet has like this new motivation to finish the case, now that her mentor/ lady cop friend is in a hospital. I mean it’s cliched, but I love it ! It could only be better if Rainer died in the hospital and Juliet was like,”I’m going to finish this one for you.” or something.

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  19. Is their a pic of the Vanquish ? Is that the James Bond car ? Oh, Lile you and your James Bond refrences.

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    1. Yep, just google "Silver Vanquish. James Bond never drives a Vanquish . . . but Bella Cullen does (:

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  20. IDK, messing with people like Claudia and Derek and getting involved with them seems like it could get you killed. I’d try and frame them.

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    1. I would, but Clara wouldn't she cares about her sister too much.

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  21. I feel like with the way you desribed Fierro’s facial expressions as he was aressted said so much about him. It was like his face said all the honest things his lips never did.

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  22. If we had a bad mom olympics, I’m sure Clara would take atleast silver all the way. She is the worst parent ever.

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    1. Apparently you haven’t met my wife. . .

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    2. Why do we judge Clara as a parent and not Fierro ? He is just as bad most of the time.

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    3. Hi Shawna !

      I want to agree with you, but Clara is more of a parent to Rose than Fierro is. She wanted her, cared for her and protected her for 4 years. Fierro was just kind of got Rose dumped into his life.

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    4. Interesting, but Clara didn't want Rosalie. In DSI13 she says " Even after finding out I could never quite believe I was pregnant. It was too late for me to do anything about it. . ."

      I'll post more about this this later !

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  23. So, like what do the other cops not like Rainer or something ? Why do they leave so quickly ?

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    1. Rainer is kind of a loner. I guess you could say they don't like her.

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  24. Rainer and Juliet are so epic. They need to have their own kickass USA tv show.

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    1. USA presents . . .

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    2. Psychic Eye for the Criminal Guy

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    3. Rizolli and Isle’s NY: Wakefield and Rainer

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    4. Mind Police . . . sorry, I suck at this.

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  25. Oh, please. Ya’ll know it’d be called Sixth Sense and they would work for the 6th Police Precinct

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  26. Tagline: She’s a sidekick and a psychic

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  27. So, Juliet says she couldn’t read the future. So what exactly can she do ? She just senses things

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    1. Yes, she can only sense the dead. But for some reason she can read Clara and Mr. Fierro's future. . .

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  28. The playlist is a little wonky, it’s missing a song. But, I think Heartless goes with the last two parts very well.

    Also, everyone in this serial is pretty heartless . . .

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    1. So angry about this. Oh well this chapter wasn't my music moment of awesome anyway.

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Let me know what you think !