Chapter 10
I wrote the 'Pie' section to Sweet Prince, a song which is actually about drugs and was for ABWG. I think it's the perfect song for Tomas so we may see it again . I always meant to get rid of this particular part it but instead I edited it and added it in. I was slightly inspired by the We Need To Talk About Kevin trailer, which focuses on food.
I also wrote Claudia's part to 3OH!3 Don't Trust Me.
I wish I had more to blog about. . .
Chapter 11
We aren't bankrupt of chapters yet, as for our character morality ? I think "Bookish: said it best What happened after Fierro left Mr. Delune ? ? Why does [Clara] have the vial ? And when did she take it ?
This chapter is kind of a bridge, but I think some of you will see what you were on to.
Note : All chapters "end" with third person so this chapter is split into two small sections. Don't worry it's all one chapter.
Music
+1+ - Possibility - Lykke Li
+2+ Good Intent - Kimbra (She's like Katy Perry and Nikki Minaj . .. but better)
+3+ Bad Romance - 30 Seconds To Mars/ Jared Leto/My new husband
Chapter 11
Was sweet prince in the last playlist ? Was it the one that was missing ?
ReplyDeleteYep. I mean it was in the playlist but it wasn't in the post.
DeleteWhy is “end” in quotes in your post ?
ReplyDeleteI was referring to the "end" of part I or chapter 11.
DeleteWhy am I jealous of Rosalie’s night light ? It sounds so cool with the stars on the wall.
ReplyDeleteOMG, isn't there a scene in LL where Fierro and Clara are lying on the grass under the stars and he does a title drop. Was that an intentional callback ?
DeleteWell there are a bunch of title drops in LL, but yes I threw in a few call backs.
DeleteI think you are a master at writing in 3rd person. I’d love to see a whole serial in it. Dare I say it’s better than your first . . .
ReplyDeleteAlso, I'm working on something for the Veritas reboot and I was searching images of Jared Leto the other day. . . at one point he had a pink mohawk !
No *googles* ! OMG, so funny because I used to have pink hair. We are so meant to be ! <3
DeleteWTF is going on in this serial ? I thought this would be the least creepiest one, but it is the most !
ReplyDeleteIsn't it ?
DeleteIDK, is it just me or does Rosalie DeLune have a better ring than Rosalie Fierro ?
ReplyDeleteI like both.
DeleteI like Kimbra-- much better than Katy Perry and Nicki Minaj any day. Did you see those two at the Grammy’s ?
ReplyDeleteNo, my kids would never sit through it. ): I'm adding in a few Grammy songs though !
DeleteIs Rosalie’s middle name after Emile ? How do we know Roses whole name but not Emilie’s ?
ReplyDeleteI think Emile’s last name is Henry. IDK why I just do.
DeleteOops Honey ! Emile Henry is a designer. He makes casserole and pie plates !
Delete@ Topaz - Yes, she is named after Emile.
First Johnny Depp, now Jared Leto ? What is it with you and dark haired light eyed guys who’s name starts with J . . .
ReplyDeleteWell, they can all sing ?
DeleteTouche
DeleteMatt Bomer doesn't start with a "J"
DeleteWait, has it really been years since she was underground ? OMG !
ReplyDeleteNo, just 36 hours.
DeleteI love this version of Bad Romance. Clara and Fierro could definatlry write a bad romance, but Lile writes an amazing one !
ReplyDeleteIDK, I feel like with each book, er serial we get less and less of a romantic vibe. . .
DeleteI can see this.
DeleteI hate your author’s note ! Next chapter coming soon ? I want it right now !
ReplyDeleteI'm doing the best I can
DeleteI never realized how much I liked Joy until she wasn’t going to be around anymore. I can’t believe she has a thing for Fierro though. Although honestly, a single young woman spending so much time with a single guy, I can see how it happens . . .
ReplyDeleteI feel bad now.
DeleteI think Clara is jealous of Fierro and Rose’s relationship which could potentially be creepy on a whole other level . . .
ReplyDeleteIt's great that you caught on to Clara's jealousy.
DeleteMy Sweet Prince--the name not the song itself reminds me of Hamlet and in turn reminds me of Peter. I liked Peter.
ReplyDeleteMe too ):
DeleteBig question, ya’ll ! How did Rose get Clara in a packing crate and underground ?
ReplyDeleteI just assuemd the spirits are up to something. Like maybe Lucie and someone else is helping her.
DeleteNope. None of that appears in this story for a certain reason I'll explain later.
DeleteI think Emile and Fierro have potential to have a great bromance. They always seem to come back to each other.
ReplyDeleteTake away the b and I think you have it right. I mean they lived together for quite a while. You could make a montage of them to Sara Bareilles Gravity. ♫something always brings me back to you . . .♫
DeleteMore importantly how does Rosalie know so much. Like how does she know Clara is lying ?
ReplyDeleteMaybe she is like Emma in OUAT. She just knows.
DeleteI think about this too. I mean it’s not as if Rosalie’s birth was some mysterious conception. Clara and Fierro were both in the real world and human when she was concieved.
DeleteRosalie is not really a "Mysterious conception" (seeing as I wrote the scene she as concieved during *probalyshouldn'thavetypedthat*) but having parents who are supposed to be dead has made her a little extra-normal.
DeleteI’m guessing Rose picked up calling Fierro Papa from Clara ? Is that why she doesn’t call him Father or Daddy or something.
ReplyDeleteNo, Rosalie did not pick that up from Clara. Clara calls her father "Father" so Rosalie wouldn't use that.
DeleteI like to think she picked it up from all the fairytales her mother read her.
I love how you put my question in the post and yet refused to answer any of them.
ReplyDeleteI will answer them in the next post. I promise. . . or do I . . .
DeleteHow dare you mention a trailer and then not put a link in the post. What are we supposed to do, find it ourselves. We’d have to open a whole other tab.
ReplyDeleteI didn't want to link it, it's a little creepy.
DeleteThere was so much tension it was . . . dare I say it, palbable.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you think so.
DeleteLoved everything about this one. I didn’t really see it as a bridge. The last one felt more like a bridge to me.
ReplyDeleteI can see that.
DeleteWait, so what were we on to ? We discuss so many things I forget.
ReplyDeleteI'll make a list in the end for you !
DeleteLove the pic at the top. I know they are just randome pretty images, but I can totally see Claudia and Derek with iPads glued to their hands.
ReplyDeleteDerek has a blackberry, so he might have a playbook.
DeleteWhere on Tumblr do you find those am-uh-zing photos ? They are super pretty !
ReplyDeleteI don't know. I do the hunt and dig method. I find a Tumblr I like and I stalk it for the day. Then I do the same thing the next day.
Delete#laundrynevergetsdone
I think the only adult who wouldn’t be creeped out by Rose is Fierro and that is why he is the best parent for her.
ReplyDeleteTruth.
DeleteThe tension between Fierro and Clara about trying to figure things out reminds me a lot of the Night Circus. I just had to mention it !
ReplyDeleteI want to be a NYT best seller (:
DeleteI really loved the Pie scene. It was so freaking visual I could just see it. Didn’t think I mentioned that last chapter.
ReplyDeleteThanks Hon.
DeleteWith all this awesomeness you can’t think of anything to blog ? I’d like to know more about how the story came to you.Was it in pieces or did you know the whole thing beginning to end from the beginning ? Were you always intending to kill of Mr.Delune eventually ?
ReplyDeleteThis will all come in the last post. I'll make a note of it.
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