Tuesday, January 11, 2011

Penny For My Thoughts ?


Thoughts

I have been having thoughts about how I mentioned a Pentalogy but I am just  not sure the story is there. I'm begginig to feel the same way about the S&A piece and I think it is because I am tempted to write something new. I suppose with some of the changed in my life I want to literally start a new chapter. . . . I just have to find out what it is.

That is not to say they won't happen just not anytime soon ):

Despite all of this I did manage to put together a fun  short that I mentioned earlier.

Sofia/Clara

Yes, this is written in cannon but is it cannon ? could be but probably. This is mostly because Sofia's story ends in 2009 and Clara's ends in 2011 but they are the same age as they are in their  respective stories (21,26).

I really didn't think this was going to happen but it was fun. I actually like writing about women (in general) and it was nice not having to think "like a man". It dabbles in realism a little bit but as this is new to me, I know some of this will come off as stereotypical.

Now I'm really tempted to write a more humorous side story for our male leads.

Stand In The Rain
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  1. ShawnaJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:00 AM

    This must have been fun to write, you have an excellent grasp on two amazing characters. I loved that little conversation about money that seemed to sum them up perfectly it was so well done.

    With the idea you come up with I would give you a 100 dollars for your thoughts !

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  2. JoelJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:00 AM

    If you aren’t thinking like a man . . . how are you thinking at all ?

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  3. JulyJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:01 AM

    Wow, in comparison to Sofia, Clara does come off as kind of, idk . . . basic ?

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  4. HarperJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:01 AM

    That scene with the stretch marks and the bra felt so real, I can just see me and my girlfriends doing that. I mean minus everything afterwards.

    She may have made some mistakes but I love and miss Sofia

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  5. TabbiJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:02 AM

    This kind of made me think, is Clara a vegetarian also ? I never noticed if she was or not.

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  6. ErikJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:02 AM

    I’ve seen this porno . . .

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  7. AshlynJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:03 AM

    I think Sofia and Clara are very similar and could exist together but, I cannot imagine a moment between Fierro and Tomas, they are so different.Iit would be all like :

    “So . . .your skin in really pale.”
    “And Mr. Alexander you skin is very . . . well . . .,”

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  8. illiaJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:03 AM

    Wait, so they are the same age ? I thought Clara would be older.

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  9. HeidiJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:03 AM

    I would love to see you do something new, maybe a mystery or something.

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  10. violetaJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:04 AM

    Why does the rain make Sofia feel safe ? Am I missing something ?

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  11. sam_lJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:04 AM

    Why is Clara at a bar in some Thai food take out joint ? Doesn’t the Waldorf have a bar?

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  12. topazJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:05 AM

    So lame but I read this line : complimentary lace bra.
    And I was like where is she getting free bras at ?

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  13. ErikJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:05 AM

    Oh and this was clearly written by straight woman--you describe bras but never describe breasts. Really ?

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  14. sugarcookieJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:06 AM

    So, if you have to choose Team Sofia or Team Clara for yourself where would you fall and why ? Just wondering

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  15. HollyJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:07 AM

    I loved this--very female empowering. The two women seem to empower (can't think of another word" each other.

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  16. CarleighJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:08 AM

    Yes,omg yes we need the humor. I think you would do funny so well !

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  17. ReiJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:09 AM

    It was good, we need more of these fun little pieces.

    Oh and where is the picture at the top ? lol/

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  18. Linda LeighJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:14 AM



    @ Linda Leigh - Only 100 ?

    @ Joel - ?

    @ July - I'm not sure I understand

    @ Harper - Yeah, I know I went back in forth between changing it.

    @ Tabbi - No, I don't think she is.

    @ Erik - LOL

    @ Ashlyn - I know which is why it would not be serious

    @ Illia - No, Clara is 26 Sofia is 21. This is not cannon because of the fact that the times vary

    @ Heidi - Funny you mention that

    @ Violeta - I don't know I mean what robber waits outside in the freezing rain ?

    @ Sam_L - good question

    @ sugarcookie - I don't know. . . I really wish I had the answer

    @ Carleigh - I don't know I'll think about it.



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  19. Linda LeighJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:15 AM

    @ Rei - I couldn't find one

    I did enjoy writing this and there is no way I could write more than this, it was fun though.

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  20. Linda LeighJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:16 AM

    @ Erik - It's funny mention this (okay it's not) but I feel that two women who are mothers would not be able to sexualize anothers breast.

    why do I feel like I wrote this before ?

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  21. Linda LeighJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:17 AM

    lol, I meant @ Shawna

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  22. JulyJanuary 12, 2011 at 1:20 AM

    I didn't want to say bitchy .. .

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  23. Linda LeighJanuary 12, 2011 at 2:05 AM

    @ July - Hm, I'd have to hear it

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