For some reason chapter 12 is one of my favorite chapters which is probably why it has a little bit "more" than chapter 11. Originally sure the whole story was centered around the characters reunited but it is not the most important part of the plot. I would consider this chapter to be somewhat of a lynchpin I'll say. Although there was something I figured more people would pick up on . . .
Unamed S&A Update
A while ago I was
Music Notes (see what i did there ?) Now that I have been spending more time at home I've been watching more sitcoms, as a result my humor has improved.
A lot of the previous chapters have intentionally featured a lot of international artist some of my favorites being Enya and Dido.
Last chapter featured another song, Meet Me On The Equinox, from the wonderful Twilight Soundtrack(the other was My Love by Sia).
Chapter 13
I'm excited as to where this is going, I just hope the flow is right I think that is the trouble with creating your own "supernatural world" so to speak.
Playlist
+1+ - Angel - Sarah Mclachlan (this is a long section)
+2+ - Dangerously In Love - Beyonce (ft. Destiny's Child ?)
+3+ - Sober - Kelly Clarkson (loved it in SA love it here ! )
+4+ - Never Let Me Go - Stacey Kent (I just like this song)
(Playlist in Sidebar. . . pop out link here)
Chapter 13
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ReplyDeleteI’m surprised MaTow didn’t get married the same day you did so you to could share an anniversary.
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ReplyDeleteHe isn’t that creepy...
Another thrilling chapter. jsyk if your template is one of the blogger pre-sets you can adjust the size of the sidebar !
ReplyDeleteAlso, (and don’t look into this comment to much) we are on the same wave lenght about something . . .
I’ve noticed in S&A and DSI the protagonist see having children as a punishment. Is that supposed to be a common theme ?
ReplyDeleteI should know this but
ReplyDeleteSober was in S&A ? At what part ?
Do babies have nosebleeds ? That sounds scary !
ReplyDeleteThis is random but, in the beginning are they sitting across from each other in the hotel room.
ReplyDeleteWhy is all the tea bitter ? I mean she drinks black coffee but, calls tea bitter ? Is tea supposed to be bitter ? I should actually know this . . .
ReplyDeleteI see wildflowers . . . in fact a lot of chapter titles from S&A have made an appearance like perspective.
ReplyDeleteThat doll comes up a lot do you really expect us to believe it means nothing ? . . .
ReplyDeleteHe poisoned her ? How cloak and dagger with a little bit of Agatha Christie !
ReplyDeleteI don’t know if this is a word but, I love all the “jazz-y music” in this piece like the Stacy Kent song.
ReplyDeleteI kind of feel like once Fierro and Clara met up the story has slowed down a bit. Is that intentional ?
ReplyDeleteWhat are your fave sitcoms (I’m guessing no skinny wife, fat husbands) ? Will you new found humor creep into your writing ?
ReplyDeleteSorry to bully you into it but, I don’t think we can act like we aren’t happy about a S&A update.
ReplyDeleteWhy is Fierro so convinced he has to kill Rose ? He is just being Victor’s puppet . . . again.
ReplyDeleteI feel like with Clara’s story on Rose’s birth she told us nothing and something at the same time but . . . mostly nothing. It’s like she doesn’t want answers.
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ReplyDeleteOn that note is their a reason you didn’t use the “” during Clara’s long speech ?
@Violeta -
ReplyDeleteI think the real question is who is the baby daddy ?
Oh also, I noticed the beginning you mentioned coffee and cigarettes--that is a Augustana song (and Otis Redding song) I was going to use in Mimic, you may want to check it out . . . idk it just made me think about it.
ReplyDelete*tsk* Fierro, is just like a man to only hear the part of the story where she compliments him.
ReplyDeleteYou know Lile, you have done some amazing things with Twilight music. When does the Breaking Dawn sountrack come out ? Anyone ?
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ReplyDeleteI think you mean when does the LL soundtrack come out ?(:
I totally knew the tea meant something . . . okay no I didn’t ,you got one past me.
Who did her father expect her to get married to ? I think Mr. Delune is being way to old fashioned.
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ReplyDeleteI know, I mean who throws the word whore around just because she got pregnant.
There are definitely some similarities between Sofia and Clara (such beautiful names BTW) experiences giving birth. They have a good tolerance for pain . . . I imagine I’ve never been through childbirth myself.
ReplyDeleteI think Clara actually liked the fact that everyone was concerned about her. Not that that was a bad thing, I imagine it must be nice for her.
ReplyDeleteI think Rosalie is up to something . . .
ReplyDeleteClara was being oversensitive, I mean hasn’t he always called her Ms. Delune
ReplyDeleteI almost didn’t read this because of the Angel song but, you actually made it work ! I feel bad now I am going to donate some money to the ASAP.
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ReplyDelete@ Erik - Oh, he wanted to
@ Shawna - Thanks Honey !
@ Hediei - No, not at all
@ July - After chapter 17, I think
@ June - Yes, and it has to be monitered
@ Tabbi - Yes
@ Nybarista - It is the Assam tea Mr. F picks up in chapter 8. It is a biter tear IRL
@ hpgirl - Oh, hmm
@ Sam_L - ?
@ Quinn - Cloak and Dagger ?
@ Carter - Funny story about her song
@ Illia - Somewhat because they are both in realtime
@ Marleigh - anything on ABC
@ Ashlyn - (:
@ Blondie - He belivies Essex
@ Violeta - I can see this
@ Selena - I used it at the start and the end like I did in chapter 11 of LL
@ Bostongirl - yes, it is
@ Shawna - Really ? I was going to tell you to look at a song to for Mimic
@ Holly - lol
@ Biteme - IDK (:
@ Trish - Yes, but remember her family is in a failing business and he needs more money
@ Appletini - She also wasn't married. Her sister's may not have waited till marriage but atleast they didn't get pregnant.
@ Cherry - I'll look back
@ Rei - Yes
@ Topaz - ?
@ Harper - She was a little drunk.
@ Lori - oh, honey I think you mean SPCA
ReplyDeleteI'm changing the main website so it has a white background.
ReplyDeleteThoughts ?
Sober is used in SA chapter 13, not 17 (:
ReplyDeleteThe white makes the pink colored links really stand out !
ReplyDeleteAhh, I had a blonde moment. I meant to say donate to the SPCA ASAP. Lol *fail*
ReplyDeleteI bet it would be hard but, you could do a bookshelf like background.
What do the ? mean ? Do they mean you don't understand the comment ?
ReplyDelete@ Lile
ReplyDeleteOh,one more thing. What was the song you were going to suggest?
@ Topaz - it means I don't know how to answer the question
ReplyDelete@ Shawna - I have to look for it (: