I just want to say how happy I am for Shawna and Erik and I totally did not help pick out the engagement ring !
Chapter 8
Consider it a study guide or more crazy
There is a bit of intrigue going on in this story and even I lose track of what's going on. I usually make a "motivations" list to help keep track
I think the thing to understand is that Mr. DeLune asked Mr. Fierro for help in creating a reward for Clara, realizing how in need of money and how proud Martin was he then decided to blackmail Martin hoping he will once again come to him for money because he is "predictable"
Chapter 8 really revealed that Martin hadn't used the money from chapter 7 to pay the ransom hoping Mr. Fierro wouldn't find out but of course . . .
Chapter 9
So here it is chapter 9, this was orginally chapter 8 but I felt that this section was necessary for the story to be well rounded, if you will. This chapter is slighly less complicated. . . at least at first glance.
Playlist
This playlist features in particular order ; One song by an italian pianist who isn't Clara, One song I've used before, one song that has been on almost every primetime drama and another song that really grew on me
+1+ - Piano Sonata No. 14 - Murray Perhaia
+2+ - Le Onde - Ludvocio Einaudi
+3+ - 9 Crimes - Damien Rice
+4+ - Blower's Daughter - Damien Rice
Chapter 9
oh, thank you ! I should have known you had a hand in picking the ring. You were the only person who knew before I did !
ReplyDeleteYeah, picking out that ring was fun, remember how awesome that was when we went to Kartyair ? I was being a jerk and I'm sorry. I hope you aren't still pissed at me because friends are supposed to have epic fights on day and then get hight and knock off a liquor store the next.
ReplyDeleteThis chapter was hopelessly romantic a little bit and I love it ! I feel like Clara and Mr.Fierro's relationship is maturing.
ReplyDeleteDid you know Damien Rice was Irish ? I love how you reperesent for us Irish peeps ! This chapter was kind of sensual.
ReplyDeleteI was just waiting for Mr.Fierro to do something about Clara picking at the flower. It played off as light comedy in my head.
ReplyDeleteIs their a picspiration for the dress ? I have a feeling there is !
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ReplyDeleteI was referring to the dark blue and white one with gold buttons. If it wasn't obvious
I was lmfao when Mr.Fierro said it seemed like a good idea at the time. I have no idea I why am so innappropiate.
ReplyDeleteThat's Ironic Echo, right ?
I think there is something up with this line :
ReplyDeleteI stopped suddenly noticing the brilliant red roses, true I had seen them hundreds of times but had they always been this bright? Reaching for one I pricked my finger letting a single drop of blood run down.
Why does everything look brighter ? Was Mr.Fierro comparing the blood on his hand to the color of the flower ?
I love how we finally learn what his deal with the flowers are. But, I think Mr.Fierro likes the beauty as well
ReplyDeleteWell, I think this chapter threw a lot of HoF theories right out the window. Oh well, on to more.
ReplyDeleteI have a feeling Mr.Fierro is going to commit suicide beacuse the next closest "home" he had was on Litany Lane
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ReplyDeleteAssuming that people who commit suicide don't end up somewhere other than LL or BH.
“Don’t your remember, Addison”, she looked me straight in the eye with sweet contentment, “You let me in.”
ReplyDeleteI honestly wonder what it is like to have a woman look at you like that.
This is so minor but, has Mr.F worn glasses the entire time ? I never noticed that.
ReplyDeleteLucie is kind of dumb, I mean you seal two people in their 20's in a hot room (forcing them to take of their clothes) with nothing to do what do you think is going to happen ? I mean, really ?
ReplyDeleteIn the last post were you making a twilight reference with the dog kicking and clumsiness or was I missing something ? I didn't know Bella kicked dogs
ReplyDeleteI wonder why Mr.Fierro has Daisies in his greenhouse to begin with. Aren't they cheap flowers ? Or is the Daisy a symbol for Clara. Daisys are fun and innocnet flowers while roses are like passion
ReplyDeleteDoes Mr. Fierro have and Violets in there ?
Aww, I think all Mr.Fierro wants is to be touched by another person. To be loved. One touch and he almost forgets his vengeful plan
ReplyDeleteYou know you'd think the fact that he slept with Martins daughter would be enough for Mr.Fierro to call it revenge.
ReplyDeleteI bet Martin would be Pissed about that since he seems not to like Fierro
Is their a reason Mr.Fierro bosses people around all the time? I mean he could be more polite
ReplyDeleteIDK what poem Mr.F is reciting but, it fits the moment perfectly
ReplyDeleteI loved the quick update ! I kind of hope they both die so they can spend eternity together. It would be a perfect paradox to S&A where we know one of them will die in less than 5 years
ReplyDeleteFor some reason this story, ecspecially Mr.F reminds me of the "This Bitter Earth" dance Mia Micheals did on SYTYCD Showcase,--which BTW nobody invited me to--- I feel like Mr.Fierro is between all those stages, I feel like there is still a youthful innocence because he has obsessions, he is also a young man because he loves passionately and he is also acts very old at the same time
ReplyDeleteOkay, I am sensing some Garden of Eden metaphor but, I'm not sure . . .
ReplyDeleteI want to ask are there even any metaphors in this ? Or are we all just seeing things. Should we look out for forshadowing, symbols, and metaphors ?
ReplyDeleteI don't think Mr.Fierro is trying hard enough to save them because if he does that could mean he has to leave his house.
ReplyDeleteI liked that this chapter stood on it's own it was kind of in real time.
ReplyDeleteI lost my footing and fell into the frosted ground, my muscles ached with a sharp pain that I new to be all in my head.
ReplyDeleteThis line and the one after preplexes me so much that I have had other people look at it. Is he dreaming at this point or Does Mr.Fierro have that disease where you can't feel pain or something ? Or is it something really simple and I'm just stupid
That last song ended right with the ending of the chapter and it was so haunting.
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ReplyDelete@ Shawna - I even knew before Erik (:
@ Erik - we. . . we're friends ? (: Oh, I forgive you Honey
@ June - That's why I love him !
@ Ashlyn - Oh, that's good. There was a tinsey bit of humor.
@ Nybarista - No, but I'll find one.
@ Rei - Not really, that was more of a bit of humor and I wasn't entirley sure where that came from. An ironic echo would be more like . . . well who knows I may throw one in another chapter
@ Tabbi - Actually he is thinking about a conversation he and Clara had earlier . . .
@ Heidi - Well, doesn't everyone.
@ Harper - Oh, really ?
@ Topaz - Oh, so morbid
@ Lia - Hm, I never thought of that
@ Joel - Stop leaving mean comments on my blog.
@ Hellen - you know it's funny he does a few times (on and off) in LL/HOF and that is because people with albinism have poor vision (and he was driving earlier) of course this all leads to something else.. .
@ Hpgirl - to be fair she has other things on her mind . . .
@ Daisy - oh, no I wasn't making a reference although I guess we could assume Bella's clumsiness is to get her away from Sue status. I just thought kicking dogs was. . . you know mean.
@ Violeta - Okay I let you in, Clara was playing a game
@ Wilson - Yeah, I figured this
@ Quinn - I'd buy that but when he was telling Clara what to do he was "flirting" with her.
@ Peace_goddess - Elizabeth Browning's Sonnet 44 (I edited it a bit)
@ Marcia - Oh, you don't know the half of my "ending" to S&A
@ Jason - It's easier to get in with teenage girls.
@ Hilary - Um, not so much but I can see it now.
@ Sam_l - Oh, Yes
@ Georgia - very true
@ Carleigh - Yes, that is what made it so hard to write
@ FunnyGirl - It's based on a scene from Brokeback Moutain ( I couldn't find a clip ) Where Heath Ledger's Character begins to feel physical pain because of an emotional feeling (ie leaving the mountain). Does that clear it up ?
@ Marianne - Oh wow really, that must have been creepy
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Thank you guys for sticking with me.
@ LL- That was not a mean comment!
ReplyDeleteOh, it does, that is soooo sad !
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ReplyDelete@ Joel - well it wasn't nice
@ Funnygirl -):