Sunday, January 24, 2010

And then things get wierd . . . but not what you think.

So, this is going to be a little odd but I have the last few (ie more than 3 less than 10) chapters of S&A. I didn't realize how far along I was when I started posting Litany Lane. So I think I'm going to switch gears and post the next chapters. I'd love to have additional opinions if this is a little to confusing. They just kept attacking me and I gave in ! .

S&A


So, while getting back into S&A mode I looked over some stuff and saw another UL similarities in chapter 4.

“Ever since I first moved here I felt like I’m losing parts of who I was and I just needed a little of the old me. . . please forgive me”

hello to you too

(Tuesday, September 22, 2009)

Now in UL

I gave a smile to the guard and walked to Sawyer’s bed, his eyes were half open.

“You did it ?” He asked

Hello to you too.

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Maybe I stole for Shawna?

Getting back in the game

Okay, so to get us back in the game feel free to skim the last 2-3 chapters. Let's see how this goes I know it's been too long.



Anywho, here we go


Playlist

I

+1+ - Daylight - Matt & Kim


II.

+2+ - No One - Alicia Keys


III.

+3+ Say it right - Nellie Furtado

+4+ It Ends Tonight - All American Rejects


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Chapter 14 : Temporary

31 comments:

  1. Things do get weird ! You have no idea how many potential things I saw that are similar. But, it's okay ! I think the hello to you too thing is a common saying.

    It's funny I was going to use that AAR song as the last song back when I was going to have Sawyer assasinate Caine. It was before I invented Rhett.

    Good to hear back from more S&A

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  2. Darn you Shawna I wanted to get first on Linda's blog to bother her ! Oh, well. I have to say I think girls (ahem, women sorry) like this because they may like Tomas but what are you offering us guys ?

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  3. Maybe it was me or maybe it was someonelse but I totally called Tomas being gay. From day 1 actually, actually since I first found out *you* wrote this. How long have you known

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  4. ^^^
    Um, sweetie I don't think he is gay (or atleast out of the closet in this canon). Although I think that instance has some kind of greater signifigance.

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  5. I feel so bad for Sofia, I don't think she deserves to live like this. I'm not sure any guy is worth all that trouble.

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  6. Okay, even though I am pretty sure Sofia had a miscarriage here is what I find intereseting :

    Tomas talks about the pain of a tattoo being temporary and the end result is permenant and better than anything.

    This also alludes to pregnancy being a temporary state of discomfort but, the end result lasts for a lifetime and it better than any tattoo, sex or drug.

    Well, the last line is IMO, I have 2 babies at home

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  7. Some people have some deep discussion and thoughts but I am just glad to get back into the TomFia drama. I love Tomas so much !

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  8. Is HASA a real thing ? I imagine South Bronx is a hard place to live (and my only source for this is Facts of Life) but it is only temporary.

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  9. “Sofia?”, I handed her the key, she looked like she might stab me with it.

    Oh do I know that feeling.


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  10. So, you admit to stealing from Shawna. DIAF, seriously I don't even bother to read this crap

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  11. I dont think LL is stealing. If she was she was being really stupid about it by posting it. Maybe they spend to much time together.

    Anyway, I think Tomas's boss is being mean. I think she does it for money and Tomas does tattoos for the art.

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  12. I really like S&A for my reasons and I have been with it for the long haul but I have to say (and here comes more weirdness) that Sofia is an Ophelia.She is driving herself crazy and getting herself in trouble because she thinks she is in love with this man. I know you are married to JB and you guys don't write to teach and you are a femenist but I have to admit I am concerned about the message this might send.

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  13. Did you ever say where Sofia worked ? It's unfortunate Tomas doesn't have a GED, I thought when he grauduated HS he became an apprentice.

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  14. "I don’t want anyone laying a hand on my wife and getting it back.”

    I love Tomas, I'm about to go on vacation to Lithuania and find me one

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  15. Are you going to tell us what Tomas and Sofia said in Lithunaian ? I'm curious and can't really place the context

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  16. I really like that first song you have ! I feel bad for Tomas but,I love how hard working he is. I may have to join Carliegh on her vacation

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  17. I think that is one of the worst cliffhangers in S&A history (only second to the one when Tomas comes back after Sofia spends a night with Adam). I have to know what happens

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  18. I think it is good Tomas is so protective of Sofia, I think it shows he really loves her, I'm not sure if Sofia does anything to deserve to keep his love.

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  19. When Tomas asks the cop is he working tomorrow because he is joking around about taking illegal drugs ? Or is he talking about taking him out for drinks.

    I think S&A is better than anything on the networks these days, I love getting back to this.

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  20. So, are you going to finish S&A before you go back to Litany Lane ? I love hearing about Tomas Alexander I do feel like the world is after him though, he has had it hard.

    I just realized Litany Lane is LL like Linda Leigh

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  21. I think Tomas is an Ink Addict too. Why doesn't he just give Sofia her ring back ?

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  22. It's funny I always imagined Sofia significantly shorter than Tomas so, it is weird that she can hold on to his collar standing up. I guess it's because you posted pics of Ellen Page who is itty bitty

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  23. It's sad Sofia can't enjoy pregnancy although whether I was married or not I don't think I would like to see myself pregnant

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  24. I love hearing from Tomas too. I knew a bit about the brillant woman behind LL and I thought when you first introduced Tomas he was going to be a creep but, I have grown to really like him.

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  25. Attention !Warning!: Snakebites are a type of piercing. Do not just lmgtfy snakebits. That is all

    I like this chapter, I did not read back but reading this made it all come racing back. I can't wait for more.

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  26. I don't think TomFia will end on good terms because they have to many secrets from each other. Although I will say the fact that they have been through all this and remain together is nice. Most people can't wait for more but, I can't wait to see how it ends

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  27. Getting a tattoo of an apple because it was a girlfriends nicknames ? That sounds so funny it can only be a true story !

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  28. It must hurt making out with someone with mouth jewelry. Is Tomas supposed to be a rebel ?

    I love your work and I loved meeting you !

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  29. I can't believe Tomas is making Sofia live in the South Bronx, that is terrible, I feel like something bad could happen.

    I may get blasted for this but, I kind of liked Gracelyn she had some spunk

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  30. @ Appletini and July

    While South Bronx is not Beverly Hills, I believe Sonya Sotomayor is from there and she is sucessful.

    Hmmm . . . that also ties in slightly to LL's 'alleged' feminism.

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  31. @ Shawna -uh, you were going to what ! Why didn't you blog about this ?? very interesting. I would have liked to see that ending !

    @ Erik - I don't know what that means

    @ Wilson and Jason - I'll let you two battle it out till the next chapter

    @ Sunshine - We'll see

    @ Violet - well, if you consider 18 years temporary discomfort I highly agree with you.

    @ Topaz_dreams - yeah, I really wanted this chapter about him.

    @ July - HASA is a real agency and the South Bronx circa 80's is different from the 21century version. Mott Haven is increasingly trying to be the new Williamsburg.. . but I'll blog about this later

    @ Joel - LOL ❤(45)10 (to the tenth power)

    @ loveshereyes - I don't know if I did or if it was a coincidence.

    @ Laruen - Well, we all have to make money

    @ Heidi - noted and understood, but I was hoping for more of an infulence about foster care,terminal and mental ilness, (here we go) health care and social stigmas.

    @ Sunset - she doesn't work but worked at Angeline's breifly. in chapter 1 Tomas says he skipped out on his graduation. I guess it sounded like he just meant the ceremony.

    @ Carleigh - Oh, dear. Did I write that.LOL

    @ Delia - oh, I meant to tell you not to google it becuase it might ruing the context, but I'll tell you.

    He says in Lithuanian"I love you . . . you are very beautiful to me"

    "I'm sorry I don't speak Lithuanian"

    @ SugarCookie - Take me with you !

    @ Hpgirl - you will, I promise

    @ Ms. Harper - that's always the conundrum. But why is love about deserving ?

    @ Ashlyn - He didn't want the cop to be drunk on the job.

    @ Daisy - Yes I'll finish this first.

    @ Alexa -. . .

    @ Boston Girl - Let's say she is wearing wedge sandals.

    @ Rita - To each thier own.

    @ April - I don't hate men that much.

    @ Blondie - I hope some NSFW images didn't come up. He was originally going to have viperbites but I think they look douchey

    @ SamL - Me neither (except I already know)

    @ Lili-A - "Is he supposed to be a rebel ?" We'll see. It was nice to meet you to.

    @ Appletini - Me too, TBH

    @ S_kerns - I'll admit part of it is about understand "gentrification" but I orignally wrote in a character to portray that but had to write her out. Blog about this to.

    Thank you everyone

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