Saturday, October 3, 2009

Words

Hello

So, I don't have much to say about the last chapter except that this particular chapter had been my main goal since the beginning. I had planned to make it a dividing point plot-wise but I don't really see the need. When I heard the song I Will Follow You Into the Dark and SidewaysI thought they were perfect for the chapter (thanks, Scrubs !).

Now I'm working on the next few chapters and It's really just notes because the words to make a story just aren't coming to me ): I have been working hard at my other job and taking care of my personal life I think maybe the stress is stunting me ? I hope to work it out soon I have lots of pictures, music and ideas to work from.

Speaking of pictures I wasn't sure what kind of car to give Adam, I knew there were hard-top convertibles but I decided to give him a VW Eos even though they wouldn't have been out yet.



With formatting of the chapter Emotion I added the section with Kasey at the last moment, originally it had Sofia visiting a grief counselor with Severine and Adam picking her up in his car and taking her to New Jersey and then the last section.

I'm not sure why I changed it but I wanted there to be a little more about Tomas and Sofia's relationship and yes there is a reason why they are both reminiscing in the beginning.

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14 comments:

  1. That is such a cute car !

    Does writing something that takes place in the past stunt your writing at all ?

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  2. Awww, hon I know the feeling at being at a loss for words, I find sometimes the best thing to do is take a break. Good luck !

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  3. Which episode of Scrubs is the Citizen Cope song from ? I bet it is a sad one

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  4. So, orignally Severine was in the New Jersey scene ? Did Severine know about the AEG job ?

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  5. The entire plot was running towards Sofia thinking Tomas was dead. I have to say I really believed it but in the back of my head I didn't.

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  6. I think they were remeniscing because that's what you do when you create a eulogy or put together a weak. For some reason this story has me thinking that maybe death isn't bad thing and isn't necesarily the end.

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  7. I'll send good writing vibes your way ! This story is so inspired and everything you write is too perfect. You are an excellent story teller. I hope that helps with your dry spell.

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  8. Oooh, pictures ! Will you share them with us ? I mean once you are done with them. Were their a lot of pictures for these last few sections ?

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  9. Miss Leigh, I'm sure you will be inspired to writing again soon, it can be like an addiction and soon you will be craving it again.

    Congrats on over 50 posts, I need to get back to the blogging thing.

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  10. That episode of Scrubs was soooo sad, it really made me think for a while about my own life. It was like the perfect mix of funny and serious. Are there going to be a lot more Scrubs songs ?

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  11. Have you ever said who you think looks- wise Severine is like ? I still have to know the answer to the will she or wont she go !

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  12. If you do take a break, don't let it be too long. I haven't gotten this into reading since I found out what banned books were in high school

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  13. ^^
    So, like what 2 years ago ?

    Maybe a few drinks will help get you more creative !

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  14. @ Wilson - Me too !

    @ Jason - Zing !

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Let me know what you think !