Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Down the Road

Hello,

So the last chapter was pretty intersting for me, these next few are going right on down my numerous notes and after doing some collective re-reading I feel like I'm on the right track.

I once read that a good story doesn't have to be told in order and I was very close to not putting this chapter in chronological order but I wanted their to be a progression.

I have a little playlist once again not using the awesome song that I love, but it's in the next chapter !



I.

+1+ & +2+ - Look After You - The Fray

II.


+1+ & +2+ - How To Save A Life - The Fray

+3+ - Silent

+4+ - Gotta Get Through This (Acoustic) - Daniel Bedingfield


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Hold On

27 comments:

  1. You stole my song, jk ! Love The Fray !

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  2. You can't have a have something take place in a hospital without using that Fray song can you ?

    I'm kind of pissed that Tomas is leaving Sofia but, British people tend to be way hotter.

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  3. It was so short, nooo !

    I always though it was going to be Sofia leaving I had no idea it would be Tomas.

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  4. That little idea about heaven just being a white space was kind of chilling to me in a way. I feel like even though it was short a lot happened, I love the way it moves beautifully across time

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  5. They are so right about that things being in order is not necessary just look at the 500 days of Summer movie. I love when things are taken out of order

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  6. I so hate Tomas right now, I mean she quite literally saved his life and he goes and leaves her. He also seems to be hiding a lot so I wonder if he is hiding anything else ?

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  7. How does Sofia know he has pneumonia when she is talking to the nurse but, earlier I thought she thought it was him wasting.

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  8. All the nurses being all bow-chicka-wow-wow over Tomas added a nice lightness to this story. I am so sad that Tomas and Sofia are over but, I think he is doing it to help her.

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  9. I wonder what Tomas is drawing in the hospital. What is it ?

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  10. I love how Sofia looks around to see if Adam is there. I hope she goes to England.

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  11. So, we can assume their second marriage was in a catholic church ? Tomas is a really bad Catholic,lol.

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  12. Does the fact that she has been watching Tomas smoke for so long but can't do it herself mean anything ?

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  13. There is a similarity-- we both have characters who were married and are now getting unmarried.

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  14. I wasn't feeling anything about their annulment but then I saw the picture at the end and there was a little tear.

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  15. I think the annulment is one of the most unrealistic and unselfish thing these two characters have ever done.

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  16. Anullment ! I never saw that coming, I can't wait to see what happens next.

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  17. Is Petal Brooke in North Carolina ? Why do they talk about NC law.

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  18. @ Shawna - I didn't realize you used that song !

    @ Wilson - Johnny depp is hotter than Hugh Jackman

    @ Topaz - I know it's short but there are lots of updates to be had.

    @ Violeta - I think really thinking about the afterlife can be scary.

    @ Heidi - I agree

    @ Bella - She saved him when he didn't want to be.

    @ Paige - When she gave him CPR she saw the white spots in his mouth, it's why he wouldn't let her feed him

    @ Ariel - Lol

    @ Penni - It's a window

    @ HPgirl - Interesting, I didn't intend to imply that but it is plausible

    @ Ashlyn - He is

    @ Tabitha - No

    @ Shawna - I know I thought that would be the BIG similarity you noticed.

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  19. I hope Sofia finds what makes her truly happy. Does Tomas changing his life mean he is going to sober up ?

    I heard the bible condems tattoos but, it's a jewish thing.

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  20. Linda-- Two words Orlando Bloom

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  21. @Linda--I also noticed both of our heroines wear heels to work but, that is so minor. I am just looking for them, lol !

    But, I don't know much about divorce/annullment to tell how they are similar or different.

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  22. ^^
    I'm sure Linda knows all about divorce.

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  23. @ Sunrise - aww, really ?

    @ Mrs. R - So it's unrealistic but not selfish, I think I'm a little confused

    @ Decaf - mean either

    @ Daffodil - Yes !

    @ Lorel - Time will tell

    @ Wilson - Touche

    @ Shawna - Well, it's because the Catholic Church doesn't grant Divorce.

    @ Joseph - (;

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  24. Linda-- I meant to say realisitic

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  25. Why do you answer my comments with emoticons ? This isn't twitter.

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  26. Mrs. R - I agree.

    Joseph - I don't know what else to say to your comments most of the time. If I was married to you I would probably ask you why you are so needy for people to express written thoughts on you.

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  27. Linda-- Not only is that a long comment it is also an odd one. . . . I was just wondering. What is this marriage talk ?

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Let me know what you think !