Hi everyone
I first want to thank you all for the wonderful feedback, I love hearing your honest opinions.
I had the day off from work so it gave me time to think about the next part of the story but I wanted to kind've explain how I got to where I did. I know I've said a million times how close the stories are to my real life, but I was trying to stray from that.
While listening to Shawna's Playlist I realized that what I knew personally was what was driving both me and the characters and it was like something snapped and it all came very clear. I'm sure some of you like to live in stories and don't watch special features on DVDS or meet actors after a play so I'm putting a warning here to stop reading if you don't want to know these kind of things.
After I had finished section one, I had to find some way to split Tomas and Sofia up. I even asked a friend about Amnesia and I was ready to go with this idea but it seemed to overdone and I thought it was boring (as I whined to Shawna About). I knew that Tomas wouldn't leave unless he thought it was for her own good, if he thought he was hurting her. I think after that it all became cake,so much so that I actually bought a cake to make it seem easier.
Well, there is my daily rambling.
*whine* But, why do they have to be split up ? *whine*
ReplyDeleteAmnesia would have been really overdone,good call.
ReplyDeletedid you ever consider Natural disaster ?
ReplyDeleteWhy was leaving for her own good, though ? Because he was ashamed of the fire ?
ReplyDeleteTo the above posters : I think the drugs and Angeline split them up.
ReplyDeleteThis whole Spirits and Angels thing was really cool. I loved it. Will you be doing more like it ?
ReplyDeleteI think we all assume Linda is Sofia in the story but, I wonder if she is Tomas
ReplyDeleteomg,if all those things really did happen to you I am so very sorry.
ReplyDeleteYou and JB must have a lot in common.
OIC, this is so cool you posted this I love stuff like this
ReplyDeleteI love getting into your process, which of Shawna's songs did it ?
ReplyDeleteHave you ever considered making the Spirits and Angels story into a script for a movie on Hallmark because I think this would be perfect for them.
ReplyDeleteOkay, so this is random and you don't have to answer it but,going off the above poster if they did make a movie what actors do you see potraying TomaSofia?
ReplyDeleteDid you literally buy a cake ? What kind was it ?
ReplyDeleteHey, I just got into the series. I actually read this blog before I read the story excerpts and it helps make the story. Like it MAKES the story.
ReplyDelete*waves to July*
Hey, Linda that addition takes the cake, lol
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ReplyDelete@Topaz - I don't know
@Samantha L - I have to thank my friend for that one
@Edie - oh, good one. Why didn't I think of that ?
Lila - He blames himself for ignore that she is doing drugs. He can't tell her to quit if he can't.
@Ariel - That sounds about right
@Iliene -I want to but everytime my mind wanders it goes right back to Sofia and Tomas, I'm working on it though. is your name pronounced Ellen ?
@Hpgirl - intersting
@hates_hates_jso - I'll write more about this later
@Spirited_Angel - thanks, love the username (of course)
I love this cookie ! Will there be more ?
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