First I want to congratulate Shawna for finishing her awesome story, it just shows that she deserves her golden leaflet. I loved getting to know Shawna through her story and our mutual comments.
I was concerned about Shawna during her writer's block and when she was having a hard time but I guess times like those bring out the best and I think we were all clapping at the end, okay just me ?
Music
So, just a note on the music. I will be using mostly modern-classical which is usually (here goes my secret) Musical Scores, meaning I wouldn't take song titles literally.
Clarifications
I just want to get a few Geographical (my worst subject) things straight.
1. Litany Village is a "Town" in Nightfall
2. Litany Lane is a street (well, Cul de sac) in Litany Village
Emile and Clara
In the comments someone asked why Emile dressed like Fierro and I originally had a sentence where Emile says that Mr. Fierro has rubbed off on him but for some reason it seemed really awkward (not for the reasons you think). Also ,becuase it was also mentioned in the comments, Emile died in 2002 and the story takes place in 2007 (don't ask me why, it just does)
A little note about Clara is that her "I saw the roses" line was supposed to be her "I carried a watermelon" line.
Chapter 3
*there are no pictures for this one, I just couldn't find any ):, but here is an Alternative S&A image.
I only have one song that you MUST listen to, it's pretty nice.
Hide and Seek - Imogen Heap
LALA
Chapter 3
P.S
I'll probably post chapters four and five together or five and six. . . I don't know yet.