I'm starting to notice a lot of people from the "Office" supporting me and it is nice but I'm sort of new to this whole office politics thing. I mean there was an epic debate over the proper desert to bring to an office party. I guess you could say that is why I mostly work from home. (speaking of which what is with this Hannah Montana forever ?)
Chapter 2
hmm, I noticed there were no "too shorts" so I'm happy for that
Notice something ?
Remember Clara's first flash back ? Remember the first few lyrics to that one song ?
There was another illusion with Mr. Fierro being able to cut himself with a pen but that was somewhat unintentional.
Who's telling the story ?
While writing LL I found it easier to write one POV. I mean sure I switched it up in S&A etc. but as I was doing this I realized I couldn't chapter off the POV so I usually try to bookend it so it's one and then the other just wanted to know how that was going. (I don't know how Shawna does it)
On that note I started to realize that here are three people telling the story. First there is me (the third person), Clara and Mr. Fierro in their flashbacks and the present is technically me as well because the characters don't know what happens.
With that said I think I tried to make it more distinct. The characters are telling the story. This lends Clara to be an unreliable narrator and how she makes it obvious that she knows what happens for example when it comes to Mr. Thorpe's first introduction
". . .Whose name I didn’t know then"
Mr. Fierro adds to his own narrative it as well which is why he mentions how many seconds there are to reach his study and the like and why his speech is a tiny bit antiquated.
Places
1770 House and Wolffer Vineyard- are real places and the patio is beautiful !
Chapter 3&4
It's double day !
Playlist
Today's playlist features a final song from a deceased legend and a song that hails from one of our main characters homeland.
Chapter 3
+1+ - Ordinary Day - Vanessa Carlton
+2+- Hurt - Johnny Cash
Chapter 4
Adagio in G - Tomas Alboni
Chapter III & Chapter IV
