Sunday, January 11, 2015

There will be coal in my stocking . . .

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I don't know why this pose made me think of Paris & Seraphina


So, Christmas Challenge ?  I know I will be playing around with doing my Christmas Novella (It will not take 3 years . . . I kind of promise). I thought I had something and I just couldn't get it down. . . so I'm back to the drawing board.

Are we really just on Chapter 6 and Beyond
I'm on a roll here because I have the next 5 chapters all plotted and written out. They just need to be cleaned up. I'm pushing for Bellum III  (I know it just keeps going) to be just 10 chapters. Which is odd because I'm in no rush to stare at a blank screen wondering where my next idea will come from.

Bellum Recap
Helios Thantos and his band of Angel mercenaries (yeah I said it) have arrived in New York City and Helios is planning something. After a year of isolation Helio's summon the newly appointed leader  of the Demons Paris Prince.

Helios makes it very clear he wants Paris and his people gone, but they aren't backing down without a fight. . . until Helios begins killing Demons,  terrorizing their livelihood and threatening Paris' every move.

Fed up with Paris' pacifism fellow Brotherhood member Callum gathers followers to start a Resistance, by making weapons out of the only material that can hurt them . . . white gold.

Just when Paris has lost everything including the woman he has just proposed to an unlikely ally walks (back) into his life,

Seraphina Grigoi has been loyal to Helios since she became his first female recruit; quickly becoming his bodyguard and lover. Her faith in Helios begins to waiver and there is talk of an uprising in the SGI. She reaches her tipping point when Helio's kills Hippolyta the woman she loved from a distance.

Added to that the reason for Hippolya's deah is Ariel, Sera's youngest and closest sister. The bond between them is broken and far from repair

Paris decides to pretend to agree to Helio's exit strategy for the Demons, while secretly trying to take him down, now that he has Sera as an informant.

The Brother's don't fully trust her but she's remained loyal, helping them destroy Helios' cars and weapons.  However it doesn't help that she and Paris are having an affair . . . or is it something more ?

Chapter 5 Recap

After Helios takes a large amount of The broherhoods profits in retaliation for them blowing up his cars, Sera and Paris track Heliosto Long Island. Helios is up to something and he is not working alone. What's in Long Island ? Why does Helios need the money ?

After leaving a voice mail on Isobel Charter's phone,  Paris is off to Boston (finally, I know) to get legal closure on inheriting Father's assets and maybe some personal closure . . .

This Section from Bellum 1 Chapter 6 comes up

 I survey our surroundings one more time and stop midstep to face her. Before she can say anything else I kiss her and can't believe I've gone all day without doing it. She relaxes and brings her arms around my neck, balancing on the tips of her toes.

"Isobel, this may not be the best time, but I want you to go to Boston with me next month. I need to sign some legal papers to transfer the company to my name. It'd be for the weekend. . . "

"Are you sure. I' mean with all that's going on."

"It needs to be done. Might as well get a respite out of it."

"Oh, A weekend in Boston. Can we take selfies where the Boston Tea Party happened. Maybe visit Paul Revere's house ?"

"I suppose. Although you know how I feel about history."

"How ?"

"You know. . . been there lived that."

Also this section from Bellum 1 Chapter 8 comes back.

She finally takes her eyes from me and walks slowly around the room, lowering her heart rate.


“The ring ?”, she asks


“Oh, no that’s not until Boston--”


“My ring”, she says with a confused look.


“Oh, damn. right. Sorry. I thought you meant. . . um. ..”


I reach into my pocket and pull out the ring I had taken when I ‘d tried to kill her. It’s made of old very tough gold. I figure it probably belonged to a relative from home. Angels then had thinner hands.


“What’s in Boston”, she asks. But she seems unsure if she should. Like she's trying to make conversation.


“Oh, um. . .It’s where I am proposing to Isobel. I needed to go up there for legal reasons and the timing just seems  . . . right.”


“Is Boston special ?”, she asks.


“You remember”, I said, “All that Colonial American shit went on.  Isobel took this course in The American Revolution last year and talked about it for weeks. I think it may inform her decision about our  .. . conflict. Anyway, it’s a rather historical city and I thought I might…”


I made sort of a vague gesture. Then I started to ramble.


“I thought maybe  I’d do it at midnight. . . right in the middle of Quincy Market. You remember when they built that don’t you ? Just before midnight in case bells ring or something. Yes. . . that way when she says yes the bells will ring and I’ll pick her up and people will clap. . . maybe ? Girls like that ? Right ?”

 Chapter 6
Bellum II PlayList 

+1+Stay With me - 30 Seconds From Mars
+2+Sweater Weather - Alexi Blue
+3+ Am I Wrong - Nico & Vinz
+4+ Cavalier - James Vincent Morrow (New LiLe SVH poster boy)

Chapter 6

46 comments:

  1. One question; Why isn't this a double chapter post ?

    Wow, I completely missed that HMLIS callback. The Paradox just never dies.
    *wants to steal entire playlist*

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    1. Next post might might be a double chapter post !

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  2. Wooooo ! Lile’’s back ! THIS IS NOT A DRILL ! I was afraid we were at the end of Paraphina, but it was so good to see them fluffing it up the best they can for two really broken people.

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  3. I may have to book a trip to Boston...is that really a popular engagement spot ?

    Oh also is that the right Stay With Me in the Spotify playlist ? If not, it totally fit.

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    1. Not sure about Boston. It should be the 30 Seconds To Mars version. . .which it is not. Oops.

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  4. I know you mentioned earlier that you put in a love traingle because that’s what paranormal romance is all about...but I’m just now realizing how rare it is to have it be two equally matched ladies between one guy.

    And really neither Sera or Isobel are like bitchy

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  5. Um...any news on Bellum IV ? I could just read about the other Angel and Demons for hours. Who needs a plot ?

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    1. I mean you do have like 2,000 years of prequel to write.

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    2. I really want the scoop on Ashe and Jona, like how they stared and the nitty gritty of why the broke up.

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    3. Why they broke up will come up later. Although a bit of it is that Ashe has always had a crush on Paris.

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    1. Yeah, isn't that Lile's birthplace ?

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    2. I do love Boston ! Funny story my Mom's parents lived in Pittsburgh so I was born in Pennsylvania ! Although admittedly I needed a city in driving distance and Philadelphia is not as classy.

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  7. That shower scene... I can’t even with the smexiness. I’m guessing that Paris’ heat hurts more than Sera’s coldness because he doesn’t seem to mind her arm on his neck when they walk. I wonder how they could work out an equilibrium that lets them touch.

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    1. *resists asking question about if every part of him is hot to touch*

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    2. @SLodger - Well, he's wearing a shirt when she has her arm over him (in public) so that helps. I'd agree the heat is more bothersome.

      @Rei - . . .not every part.

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  8. Noo, not a cliffhanger!
    Is it just me or has the flame between Paris and Sera gone out ? They seem less amorous

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    1. You are on to something. . . this is the first time they are alone and don't sleep together . . .

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  9. Lile, can you turn the Captcha off ? I'm suddenly being asked if I'm a robot

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    1. I think it's something new the site is doing. I'll see if I can change it.

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  10. Calling it now Helios is working with Buddy aka the Cake Boss

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    1. *something about Angel Food cake*

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    2. In Lux Aeterna Isobel gives Seraphina an Angel Food Cake cupcake when they are in the bakery. . . which I wasn't sure if those even exists.

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  11. he'd taken off her jacket and was dressed casually in a white off the shoulder t-shirt and light jeans with high heel boots because apparently this woman couldn't be tall enough.

    I love how Seraphina owns her height and how aside from the occasinal comment Paris doens’t seem to mind.

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    1. And she eats a 1 lb steak on a date.

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    2. Isobel and Sear are opposite. Did anyone notice that the scene with Paris and Seraphina was a call back to the first chapter with Paris and Isobel. I used the same song (Sweater Weather) and Isobel has a salad and Sera is eating steak.

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  12. I want to like Callum, but he just gets so crazy. I have a feeling this won’t end well.

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  13. Okay, I hate to say it but he should have known if he left the disabled guy in charge they were going to easily overpower him.

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    1. Everyone generally respects Lysander, so he had high hopes. In my mind Lysander puts up a good fight.

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  14. “I could… shoot them”, she said. As if she very seriously thought that would help me feel better.

    “God, no. Then it would be all tragic and they would build a monument to their ever living love.”

    I am all about this conversation, I like snarky Paris.

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  15. Wait! Is Ashe on Jona and Callum’s side too ?

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    1. Hrmmm...I have a feeling Sera knows about this whole traitor plot of Callums

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  16. Actually, Erik....Lile died is Boston...or something.

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  17. The newly engaged pair lingered in the square, blind to everyone else. People in love where inconsiderate like that
    Love this observation. In other news...Valentine’s Day is coming.

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    1. Such a good observation by Paris. Especially the way Sera was dancing with him in the middle of the street and they were making out and laughing in the elevator. . . wait.

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  18. Wow, Seraphina is such a trooper for dealing with that trip of ex-girlfriend past. I mean I get that Sera isn’t super emotional, but I’d be pretty annoyed with all the Isobel talk.

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    1. I think Sera does have feelings for Paris, if she didn’t she wouldn’t have ignored those calls.

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    2. More importantly...How does she get her hair so straight??

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    3. @ Quinn - I think she feels a little guilty. Just a little.

      @Bookworm - Hmm . . .

      @ Trish - blow dryer, flat iron and lots of patience. She's also been doing her hair for over century so . . .

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