Challenge Accepted
Doing a holiday contest may have been a joke, but I full call a CHALLENGE. Okay, I will cheat with this one but SHV I challenge you to a Holiday Short Fic contest. I will admit I have a Post-JNRR Christmas vault item I wrote last year. It was the first thing I worked on during LiLe 2.0. It has a song an everything. . . except like an ending or like a direction
Let's do it !
Warning : I WANT ZERO COMMENT ABOUT A SEQUEL TO JNRR. Thinking about it makes my soul and head hurt.
Chapter 5
So I just had a lot of fun with the music here. It was like hype music for me. Points if you can guess the Sundays reference.
Playlist
Chapter 5
+1+ Work Bitch - Britney Spears
+2+ - Howling For You - Black Keys
+3+ - Birthday Cake Rhianna & S & M - Rhianna (two songs)
+4+ - You Should Know Where I'm Coming From (I know not where this song came from but it is PERFECT Thank you spotify radio gods !)
P.S I'm joking you can ask about JNRR and/or SA sequels but the answer will always be that I could do no justice.
ReplyDeleteOkay...challenge accepted...I have no idea what i’m going to do...I may go crack-y.
I didn’t get the Sundays reference out right, but my ears perked a little at that line and I didn’t know why… however the way that line is in Sundays is very eye-stabby to me right now. It seems like a lame frat guy pick up line….oh, Sundays!Maxwell.
Oh, I really like this line. I think it showed how uber-masculine Sundays!Maxwell is trying to be. Yes, totally been wanting to steal this line forever.
DeleteCongrats on 200 posts, LiLe ! Can you tell what was post 100 ?
ReplyDeleteThat was a mistake. I have 200 post including drafts. So I'm only at 196. I got to excited
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ReplyDeleteSera sounds super robotic in this chapter--is that her distancing herself ?
and how
Delete…..*JNRR sequel*.....*Clarence story*......*Elijah story*......*more cillian*.....*more things the fans want that lils said not to mention*
ReplyDeleteOnly you Erik. Can I just say this list scares me so much ) :
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ReplyDeleteParis is literally one step behind.
He's a couple steps behind.
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ReplyDeleteUm, Callum and Sera...I ship it. Seriously, they are both pretty passionate. I mean if Peraphina hadn’t happened I think it would have been nice for them to be together. That whole stabbing thing could be a joke they laugh at later.
Speaking of which, I hope Isobel gets beta-coupled with someone. I'm really not feeling her and Paris.
Delete@Remi - Wow, I have literally never thought about this. To bad I have a partial outline to stick to.
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ReplyDelete"I was a marine, bitch.", he breathes
Lol, i don’t usually like guys calling girls bitches, but this was hilarious.
I feel like we are sort of desenitized to this word (as evidence by my song choices and post title), but he is actually calling her a vile name because he hates her because A. She stabbed him and B. She killed his friends. I
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ReplyDeleteWhy are there two different fonts on the page ?
Wait, so if Callum was a Marine wasn’t Paris ? Was Paris a soldier in Vietnam ?
ReplyDeleteYes, yes, yes. I feel like this is mentioned in Lux but Paris wasn't a combat solider. He was an officer.
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ReplyDeleteSo, what’s Helios up to?
DeleteI mean it’s Long Island….IDK, I’m sure it involves Buddy from Cake Boss
DeleteI know this is super cliche but I wonder if he is going to expose the Supernaturals
Maybe there are werewolves or something and he owes them ? Some kind of magical creature more powerful than them?
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DeleteOr he has a whole other group of male Angels or something ?
@Princess Ariel - No
Delete@Sugarcookie - No, LiLe can't handle to many fictional creatures at once.
@ Ashlyn - I should have written this in somehow.
ReplyDeleteWow, so Paris is an accountant...you know academically speaking I think Paris is the smartest Lile male protagonist
DeleteI’d think that’s Fierro, but we actually don’t really know what he does and if he’s good at it.
This is interesting. Paris is actually very smart he has been doing the book, working and taking care of Father for a very long time
DeleteWhat is interesting is both Paris and Fierro are highly intelligent people and neither of them went to college. Of course we are comparing them to Cillian and Tomas who just have high school diplomas so . . .
Well...........that’s the dirtiest song about birthday cake i’ve ever heard
ReplyDeleteYou haven’t heard birthday sex have you ? Well, I’m sure it will show up in this serial.
DeleteAfter Honky Tonk Badokabdonk I think Lile can make anything work
Delete@Bookworm - Go to love RiRi. I like how it focused on the female prospective instead of the male.
Delete@Tabbi - I have one more wild cardish song.
Awwww, Paris had a crowning moment of aww when he put himself over Sera.
ReplyDeleteYes and he got a tiny "Thanks for what you did back there" from her.
DeleteInserts Jesse Pinkman reference
ReplyDeleteThis post title so should have been 200 posts, bitch.
DeleteI'm wish I would have deleted the title faster. I'm just suprised how many songs have bitch in them.
DeleteI love how Sera just has a sh*t ton of black lingere...you go girl.
ReplyDelete. . .yeah it's all brand new too . . .
DeleteAssuming we didn’t read the blog are we supposed to know Paris and Sera are fated to each other ?
ReplyDeleteYes, it's the last line in Lux.
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ReplyDeleteThis playlist has so much bitchery---I’m also not sure who is more of a bitch, Paris or Sera.
Um, Paris. If he still thinks of Isobel as his GF then he is cheating on her with Sera.
Delete@Quinn I think (if my terminology is correct)
DeleteParis is what some may call a "whiny little bitch" and Sera is just a "bitch" but she does it on purpose.
@NYCBarista - It's complicated . . .
My favorite thing is how that Britney song is actually work B**ch even though the song is uncensored ???
ReplyDeleteI know it made it that much harder to re-locate it.
DeleteWhy does Paris call Damien and not Jona ?
ReplyDeleteBeause Damien isn't smart enough to realize how odd it is that Sera and Paris are in the same place.
DeleteHe also knows how Jona will react to Sera since he knows about them.
The only thing the bar scene was missing was some random drunkard trying to mediate their fight.
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DeleteOr trying to hit on Sera.
Those Long Island guys where to afraid to get involved. When this part came up I thought about her getting into a bar fight, but it just didn't seem like something she would do.
DeleteWow, I really hate Paris now. He never does anything and is worrying about the wrong things. It’s like he just doesn’t get it. I think it’d be interesting if Sera had a POV.
ReplyDeleteRight ? I'm like Paris if you bring Boston up one more time so help me god.
Delete@Carleigh - There is a reason this isn't in Sera's POV even though it really really should be. You will see this in the last chapter of this section.
Delete@Heidi - Oh, speaking of Boston . . .
SO CALLING THE OTHER PERSON IN THE CAR BEING ISIAH.
ReplyDeleteand so it begins
DeleteI feel like things are finally moving with this chapter, also the use of S&M was less exciting than I was hoping for.
ReplyDeleteI know, I'll try to make up for it later . . . maybe ?
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ReplyDeletehis startles me a bit, she had been gone ? Halfway across the world n and I hadn't even known.A year going to God knows where doing God know what with Helios. Maybe they'd had the same kind of year I'd had with Isobel. Maybe there was more to them than what I'd seen.
This line makes me think..are they ever going to talk about the big man upstairs? I think maybe you talked about this already.
Maybe I did and this get addressed in section three but here goes.
DeleteThe Supernatural people in this story took on the names Angels and Demons because they fit into the physical descriptions and belifs humans had about these creatures. If they are somehow derived from actual Angels or Demons is unknown.
I have a kind of funny line in section three that introduces this idea so you may see this again.
I know some of the Demons (like Lysander) are religious. I feel like Sera might be a bit religious but I'm not sure about Paris.