Notes
As I was making notes and thinking about how I have so little characters to work with I had a thought. It's odd but the more I think about it, the more I think Clara and Tomas would make a kick-ass couple ( I also think the same thing about Rhett and Alan but I digress).
In case you are wondering Mr. Fierro and Sofia creeps me out, just typing it makes me cringe.
Places
Okay so for the record I though I might point out some key places within the story
Monroe County
Farming community located in Northern Rochester, location of Mr. Fierro's current house
Chataqua, NY
Small Lakeside town where Mr. Fierro and Lucie grew up. Rainer has a house here and is staying there while she is investigating.
Rochester, NY
Upper class community where Clara and her family lives.
New York City
This is where Martin's body was found. Now I took a very big poetic license with this, for the purpose of this story NYC is within driving distance to Rochester.
More Picspirations
I can't believe I forgot Emile and I saw the perfect picsipration !
Emile & Joy Whitten
Hill Harper and Michelle Williams
Chapter 4 & 5*now with new music
Chapter 4 is pretty much the same, chapter 5 has been tweaked a bit ! I tried something new with the pictures as well.
Chapter 4
Doesn't have a playlist ):
Chapter 5
+1+ - All Of This Past - Sara Bettens
+2+ - Turning Tables - Adele
Clara is in England but everyone seems to be hiding something.. .even Rosalie, Mr. Fierro's moving back to New York and if Oleanders killed Martin that must mean. . .
What ? That's it ! Ugh, we need to get to the new stuff ! (:
ReplyDeleteI can see Rhett and Alan with some qualifications and condition . . . I do however think Slate and Tomas could have a great Jo/Blair type bromance.
Can I ask what Qualifications and Conditions ?
DeleteSoon . . .
DeleteLovely, once again !
ReplyDeleteOooh, I hate to call you out but, intensive purposes is a common grammar mistake. It’s actually all “intents and purposes”. . . I know, grammar nazi
Good ol' oral transformation
DeleteI love the pictures and how big they are. They remind me of the English lit books from grade school that would have pictures in between the text.
ReplyDeleteNot sure if this is a good thing.
DeleteIs their a name for what Fierro and Clara are now ? Like, immortals or something ? IDK. Or will that come later ?
ReplyDelete"I would have thought you'd be an expert how to deal with older men"
ReplyDelete"You would think", I said finishing my coffee
I love Clara !
Wait, who is Robert ? Emilie’s new boyfriend ?
ReplyDeleteBingo !
Delete“No”, she laughed, “It was floating . it’s too big and can’t walk on it’s own.”
ReplyDelete“What do you mean ?”, I said noting Rosalie wasn't one for a big imagination.
“People have to carry it on strings so it doesn’t get hurt.”
This was so cute, I was like daaaaaaaaw she thinks it floats because it's such a fatty can’t walk.
It’s kind of like your mom that way. Bada-dish.
DeleteSorry, I just had to. I have no idea who you are, but the moment you said that I got word vomit.
Sorry, I couldn’t stop it from coming out.
That’s what he said (;
Deleteoh, snap . . . You go girl !
DeleteI can't even
DeletePika Pik !
ReplyDeleteSo, I’m kind of in love with your Tumblr. Are you still updating it ?
Yes, I add things in from my super secret tumblr
DeleteWhy wouldn’t Clara assume the woman doll is her ? Does she think it is Joy ? Also, grown man with a dollhouse . . . this can;t be good !
ReplyDeleteIt's Rose's dollhouse (:
DeleteI remember that part when Clara’s family taken away! I remember thinking “this is going to be good !”
ReplyDeleteI hope so
DeleteHmm, I think Cal is like Victor or something. I mean Cal could be a acronym.
ReplyDeleteOMG, CAL could be her BIL.
DeleteOr her sisters ! Or Mom !
DeleteAwesome music is awesome. I love the choices !
ReplyDeleteYep, Clara. When in doubt teaching a class just underline something you put on the board. It helps get your point across.
ReplyDeleteI was going to underline this but, the tags don't allow );
They always do it o TV (:
DeleteClara has a usual seat at the police station ? Me too.
ReplyDeleteThis would be funnier if Erik said it.
DeleteOIC, in the vision Fierro stabbed her in the back. . . .
ReplyDeleteoh, never mind this is mentioned later !
(:
DeleteMan, that vision was the stuff of Stephen King novels.
ReplyDeleteHopefully it wasn't that scary
DeleteHm, I think Juliet and Clara could team up or something.
ReplyDeleteI forgot what happens at the end of HoF. Does Martin ever meet Fierro and who killed him ?
ReplyDeleteMr. Fierro does face Roger. . . But Roger had already died in his sleep. Martin does meet Mr. Fierro briefly in HOF and is convinced he kidnapped Clara but never gets to prove it.
DeleteCoffee ? I think Clara needs a shot of Jose after all this!
ReplyDeleteShe's hungover. No more Jose for her.
DeleteOkay, maybe Mr. F didn’t do it, but he had some part in it. Or somone did it before he got the chance or something.
ReplyDeleteI love the dream sequence. I guess when you see who Fierro really is inside, he loses a lot of his ‘bad boy’ charm.
ReplyDeleteDid he really have that ? I'll see what I can do.
DeleteRose has anger issues, I wonder why ? *sarcasm*. I don’t know much about kids, but it must be hard being around just adults all the time. Aside from her Uncle Clarence has she been around other kids ?
ReplyDeleteGlad you caught this, you are very right. She hasn't been around other children much. Also, she would never call him Uncle Clarence (:
DeleteI mean Hill Harper is a GQMF but, I always see Rick Fox as Emile. Keep the picspirations coming ! I love them.
ReplyDeleteMe too, but Rick Fox cheated on his wife so . . .
DeleteHow did you ever find the phots of that house ? They are gorgeous. What are the chances it woudl be where you want to set your story !
ReplyDeleteWhich house ? The one on the Tumblr was on a listing website. The one on the page is from Tumblr
Delete“Let’s say we are expediting the inevitable.”, he said taking the ring out of the box
ReplyDeleteTMFS : Don’t you DARE propose to me like this. Well, if you did it on the first date I guess it’s kind of romantic . . .
TMFS ?
DeleteOh, To My Future Spouse !
DeleteTMFS : Thank you for being Johnny Depp
I know this is blasphemy, but I like the Gwenyth Glee version of this song.
ReplyDeleteShe's pretty good but she doesn't have the power.
DeleteAuthor's Note
ReplyDeleteIn before, "OMG, LILE you said this would never happen"
Is this an old author note ?
Yes, I kept the old Author Notes.
DeleteYou know I just don't see Clara's attraction to the creepy, obsessive, melencholy, but still has children *ahem* a child type . .
ReplyDeleteI don't understand
DeleteI just don't understand the appeal of Fierro. I mean he's older, creepy, pale, holds grudges, his hair color is clearly not natural and he's kind of effeminate . . . Who would want to hit that ?
DeleteGotcha (;
DeleteFierro is so sneaky ! But, we have to wonder . . . is he pulling a Snape and doing all this mean stuff to protect Clara.
ReplyDeletePulling a Snape ? Can't wait till that is put in the dictionary.
DeleteOkay, I need Fierro’s POV. I have no idea what is going through that man’s head !
ReplyDeleteI'll see what I can do.
DeleteI hope the next repost party also has a new post party ! I need it now, you have me addicted to the story. Also, those popsicles *nom*
ReplyDeleteNo, the next post is more repeats and then we get to the new one. Careful I think those Popsicles have alcohol in them !
DeleteThe letter thing is new right ? It tired the story together perfectly.
ReplyDeleteNope, the letter was there before.
DeleteI need more ! Where is it ? I am totally back into the story. I’m seeing more personalities in the sisters. One is angry and the other one is all “Oh, jail wasn’t that bad sis !”
ReplyDeleteGlad you caught that !
DeleteI didn't answer every comment, but I feel more confident in the flow. We are moving along a little fast to get to the new stuff. (;
ReplyDeleteHmm, do the profile pics show up now ?
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