Chapter 3&4
Well I'm glad the third person is not throwing people off. There really isn't much to say about these chapters except I jumped the gun with my other comment. This chapter has Clara calling the Black Room the "Black Room", before she would even realize it. Which actually leads to something else . . .
Chapter 5
Questions will be answered and more will be raised. . . I fell like a writer on Lost ! (you know except I know what I'm doing.)
Some of you are very close though . . .
Playlist
Today's playlist contains music from a movie soundtrack and from a NOW! Valentine's day collection.
+1+ - Possibility - Lykke Li
+2+ - Here without you - Three Doors Down
I'd play the first song towards the end to.
Chapter 5
Yeah, I love these quick updates ! Does it feel like you've been writing for a whole year ?
ReplyDeleteSo, you are a LOST fan ? This does kind of remind me of it because it gives so many questions. Questions I don't even know I have yet, if that makes sense
ReplyDeleteThis chapter was awesome, it did answer some questions. Was Lucie falling down the stairs remensicent of that exorcist movie where the girl walks down the stairs in a backnbend backwards ?
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ReplyDeleteTalk about movie scenes that scare the shit out of people. I was having a few flashbacks to the ring.
Additionally, I am calling an exorcism.
Why would Lucie let Clara come out at all ? Why would Mr. F want her to. It's not like Mr. F can talk to her.
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ReplyDeleteI figured it is the only way Lucie can get some rest.
I'm still trying to figure out how Joshua ties into all of this. I think he is somehow related to the Delunes
For a second I was super confused as to why this chapter was called V and then I realized it was a Roman 5,lol.
ReplyDeleteIs there a reason these chapters don't have names ?
Holy crap, Mr. F drinks some expensive hooch. He must be pissed he broke it.
ReplyDeleteHow is this called House of Fierro ? It should be called Revenge of Lucie. Where there any other title contestants ?
ReplyDeleteI don't hate Mr. F as much anymore but, he really isn't doing much to stop this. He is letting Lucie win.
ReplyDeleteI only have one question; WHY DID HE KISS LUCIE ?!!!!
ReplyDeleteC'mon , Mr. Fierro.
It's funny how Clara and Mr. F's age difference still doesn't beat Edward and Bella's
ReplyDeleteI think the song "Possiblitly" is the poster song for lonliness/isolation now.
ReplyDeleteI think Lost just said "Oh no you didn't" and snapped it's fingers in an Z formation. Oh well atleast that plane wreck is over (Pun so intended)
ReplyDeleteI feel like HoF can only get better.
Wow, that Lucie is one scary bitch. I like it went writers put themselves into their books.
ReplyDeleteI'm going to miss your fun title names. Was any of this inspired by Supernatural?
ReplyDeleteIt was hard for me not to feel bad for Martin at this point but, I think it's odd he took Mr. Thorpe with him to talk to Fierro.
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ReplyDeleteSpeaking of Mr. Thorpe, did you give him a kind of ugly sounding name to make us not like him ?
I wonder why hurting Clara's body wont make Lucy go away. I think something has changed.
ReplyDeleteWhy is it Cobalt employees can't leave half-intelligent comments ?
ReplyDeleteWell,you see who our boss is.
ReplyDeleteOh No He Di'int ! *snap* *snap* *snap*
ReplyDeleteI really love Hof, LL and all of it but, I can't help imagining an Alternate Universe story where Mr. F comes back poor and works at 1-800 Flowers
ReplyDeleteI really wish Fierro had told Lucie I loved
ReplyDeleteyou. I'm afraid he never loved Clara and only loved her qualities that were like Lucie.
However we have to remember Clara loves Fierro organically. She had nothing to base her love for him on. I mean Mr. Fierro never acted like he was loved Clara. I think he just liked her.
ReplyDeleteThis is a bit OT but, when you said this was a temporary layout. When you change it will it be a new one or the old one ?
ReplyDeleteI just want to say I loved August, it was some perfect light reading. In the last post you said you regretted it. It kind of sets up how Mr. Fierro is living and about the weddings.
ReplyDeleteI really like learning where the music comes from. Perhaps if you make more"bloggish" blog posts you will get to 100 faster. Like posts on your personal life ?
ReplyDeleteI've noticed Lucie does not eat. Am I on to something ?
ReplyDeleteWe must start a speculation thread in the forums !
I suppose I'll add another comment for the team :
ReplyDeleteI had to look up the color Tyrian and it is a pretty purple. I love your writing style in HoF. There is a bit of the same style in Litany Lane but, its much more pronounced in HoF.
I can't describe it but, it's like a carefully dignified, elegant prose.
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ReplyDeleteI would describe it as nobody talks or thinks that way but, it would be fvcking awesome if they did.
What are some of your favorite authors ? I see a lot of Jane Austen-ishness in this like everyone else has. Well, more like saw the story has taken a horror turn.
ReplyDeleteI think you may have invented a horror-romance a genre.
*prepares for Erick's snarky comments*
ReplyDelete@ Shawna - I should ask you the same, I think you starte before me.
@ July - It's what DVD marathons are made of
@ June - Interesting you mention that
@ Erik - okay, not entirely snarky
@ Sugarcookie - . . .
@ Quinn - oh, he does tie in
@ Casey - Oh, ooops.The chapters don't have names becuase they would have been glaringly obvious.
@ Carleigh - (:
@ Ellen - There is a reason.
@ Emile_lover - These are questions I asked myself and so they will be answered.
@ Taryn - give the guy a break
@ Hpgirls - You know I wanted him to be born in 1925 originally but I figured (this is terrible) that would make Lucie too old. which gives me something to blog about
@ Illia - I didn't want to use it, but it's perfect right ? I didn't recognize it when Shawna used it and I saw New Moon 4 times.
@ Princess Arielle - Such a funny comment.
@ Jill - LOL ( I sometimes sign your paycheck)
@ Wilson - Yes (ahh, Jensen Ackeles)
@ Heartful - This reminds me of something but it is because he is somewhat afraid of him.
@ Nybarista - I kinda like that name
@ Marianne - Lucy can't feel the pain.
@ Joel - I like to thin half-unintelligent
@ Jill - *crickets*
@ Jane - (: I'd like to read it
@ Violeta - /:
@ Heidi - organically ? is that a pun
@ Dina - TBH, this one is growing on me. I was planning on reverting to the old one.
@ LilyF - interesting you mention this
@ Anon - maybe
@ Harper - she doesn't eat, she doesn't have to Clara is her puppet
@ Shawna - Hm, it happens again.
@ Erik - interesting censor
@ Appletini - I'll explain next post since everyone seems to think so.
Thanks for sticking with me, your comments help I think I'm starting to get the hang of this.