I think in previous post I made it somewhat clear that this was likely to be my last "webserial", but now I think I may have found an interesting solution but we will worry about that when the time comes.
Chapter 10
Not much to say about this chapter, except I couldn't find a piano version of Rhapsody in Blue but Youtube has one if you are curious.
Chapter 11 & 12
This is a long one, so be sure to have snacks (:
Playlist (starts at 16)
Chapter 11
+1+ - A Historic Love - Trevor
+2+ - Our Love - Paul Cardall
+3+
My Immortal - Evanescence,
You don't Know me - Michael Buble (Eddy Arnold)
Ice - Sarah Mclachlan
Chapter 12
Sacred Nature II - Paul Cardall (playlist has been rearranged so this song is at the bottom !)
Chapter 11 & Chapter 12
I am so glad I am the first comment, that was the best chapter ever ! You have seriously humbled me as a writer. It was so wonderful I loved what you did with the music.
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure if it's over or not but either way . . . Bravo ! Bravo !
I have to say I am humbled as well, Ms.Leigh. Another amazing chapter.
ReplyDeleteHearing Addy's story, OMG I was literally just about in tears. It is the most tragic thing I have ever heard.
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ReplyDeleteJust about in tears ?! I was actually sobbing a little bit during "Addy's Story" and for me it was just the little things like him not being accepted and having to go go the library after hours.
I read this with some ramen and sody pop and I'm glad I did because it was pretty long but, so awesome. I loved hearing more about Fierro, suddenly everything he did clicked.
ReplyDeleteThese are my favorite chapters. I had some strong emotions from hearing about Lucie and Fierro it was so sweet well, bittersweet.
ReplyDeleteBut, I did love that there are still coffee shops in Litany Village
Awesome chapter !
ReplyDeleteNo one will believe me but, I had a suspicion when Fierro said Clara's house was his that Fierro was her grandfather but, I thought that would be a little weird and totally dismissed it.
This chapter was full of emotion. I am ebaying vintage coffee cans so I can put some roses in them. It's pretty !
ReplyDeleteMy favorite chapter and ditto what everyone else said !
ReplyDeleteFor some reason I always thought Emile used a typewriter and not a laptop. It's kind of funny imagining it.
I imagine you have known how this will end for a long time now. But, if Mr.F is from the 50's why does he wear clothes from the 1800's ?
ReplyDeleteOr are the clothes he wears from the 50's. I'm not to big on history of fashion.
I wonder if Victor ever intended to keep his promise of sparing Emile, I don't think he would. That last dance between them was so sweet. I love love love Emile.
ReplyDeleteThis was such a lovely chapter. I liked how she had to be out by midnight like Cinderella and then her middle name was Cinderealla all of it was just perfect.
ReplyDeleteI hope it's not over just yet. My head is swimming with possibilities for what happens next. I'm afraid this won't be a happy ending.
ReplyDeleteDamn, and i thought the last cliffhanger was bad this one is even worse. You love torturing us don't you ?
ReplyDeleteWhat a brilliant writer you are ! I could almost hear the pain in Fierro's voice as he relayed the story to her and the music was perfect. I love Micheal Buble !
ReplyDeleteThe title of this blog is so decieveing ! Chapter 12 is so short it's not really a chapter,lol. Although I actually like Chapter 12 because it adds more mystery
ReplyDeleteSpeaking of sneaking suspiciouns I always had some odd idea Kayla and Emile were murdered because they were so young and Emile never talked about it. I imagined Ms.G died of old age because she was so much older.
ReplyDeletePoor Kayla !
This totally got a bit macarbe for me with all the death and murder talk. Hearing Mr.F's death made me cringe but, what is the deal with Lucy and Roger I mean how could they live with that ?!
ReplyDelete"Every time she left, a part of me went with her."
ReplyDeleteNow that is true love. So sweet but, I think Mr.F gave to much of himself to her
If Mr. F was so intelligent why didn't he get into any of those schools ? I think he may have aimed to high
ReplyDeleteI don't think you need anymore glowing comments so I 'll give you a hard time.
ReplyDeleteI noticed Mr.Fierro applied to Princeton but,not Harvard ? What is that about.
I can't believe people are having so much pre-maritial sex in the 50's but, it sure does make for a good story ! So, there is zero chance Mr.F is Clara's grandfather.
ReplyDeleteI think Mr. F's dumb move was telling Roger Lucie was pregnant but, I don't think Lucie really loved him, it's hard to tell.
ReplyDeleteI feel a bit of social commentary in this chapter or am I reaching ?
I think it's interesting that Roger saw Mr. Fierro as such a threat. The idea of his body just thrown aside, makes me sad.
ReplyDeleteI think Roger's drinking was a sign that he felt some guilt over Mr.F's murder but,it still seems such a horrid thing to do.
ReplyDeleteSo, just so I get the family tree right, One of Clara's sister's is her half-sister ?
ReplyDeleteI'm confused on how Clara is the only legitimate one ?
So, Lucie was a bit of a pack rat like Ms. Ginger ? Is that why she needed two homes ?
ReplyDeleteEven though it is a little odd he married a woman 50 years older than himself there is something kind of sweet about it. I don't know.
ReplyDeleteI think Lucie is a terrible woman, IMO ! She is jealous, selfish, vengeful and loves things more than anything.
ReplyDeleteI know Clara's grandfather has been mentioned is he dead or divorced from Lucie ?
ReplyDeleteThe fact that everyone on Litany Lane was murdered really struck me. Is that why they are all so close ? I can't imagine someone murdering Ms.Ginger.
ReplyDeleteI think there is a reason his eyes look towards the Oliver house when Mr.F thinks he is about to die. I think there is more so, I hope it is not over.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if the reason Clara isn't a specter is because someone tried to save her. Or something, I have no idea.
ReplyDeleteI wonder who it is that said Holy shit because, Clara recognizes the voice. I think it's Peter. If Clara is still alive maybe her experiences will change her life.
ReplyDeleteThis makes me question a few things. I mean what proof do they have that people who are specters become ghost after they are burned up.
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ReplyDelete@ Shawna - Thanks, Honey
@ Joel - Happy Birthday
@ July - Even more tragic to write
@ June - strange how people aren't spelling it "Addie"
@ Boston_girl - You poor thing, wish I could send you some real food.
@ Tegan - I have a coffee addiction
@ Tabbi - I knew you all were smart. (just so we are clear he is not her grandfather)
@ Lili - or yard sales
@ Gail - Yeah, he does use a typewriter
@ Rei - It's part of his "act" hince "I was not born like this"
@ Emile=love - I will reveal a little bit about what went into Emile as a character later
@ Hedei - That one was almost to easy
@ Hpgirl - It's not over
@ Erik - I'm just like that
@ Carter - He has an amazing voice.
@ Sara - true, true
@ Illia - Ms.Ginger didn't die of old age.
@ Sienna - Well Roger did start drinking and Lucie became obsessed with Material things.
@ Lorrie - true
@ Marie - Yes, that and this was before the GI bill when colleges (like those) were mostly for the elite few.
@ Jason - um, to close to home ?
@ Elena - I won't get into details but He is NOT her grandfather. although originally there was a little joke were Clara asks if he is sure and he says unless she has any relative born in '54
@ sugarcookie - I can say that Lucie does love him. Hmm, social commentary, I'd have to hear it first.
@ Marigold - Well, Roger is an insecure drinker.
@ Appletini - His drinking was guilt and Lucie and Roger actually get divorced. (it's vaguely implied)
@ Kori - Oh, no all of Clara's sisters are hers. (here I go) Mr. Fierro was telling her that her parents were married out of wedlock.
ReplyDelete@ Cherry_pie - Yes, but she had a lot of "nice things"
@ Slodger - the idea turned in my head for some time and I decided it was sweet-ish
@ Tessa - I can see that
@ Wendy - They are divorced but he is not dead.
@ Trish - She was being robbed. I know how everyone else died too.
@ Kelli - No, he was just telling her to escape to the Oliver house.
@ Seneca - I know the answer . . .
@ PrincessA - It's the man from chapter 5 who hits her car.
@ Cupcake - They just know, they always have and don't question it.
oops on the mispelling ! I was copying July,lol
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