Due to some recent events, I decided to scratch the sample I had been writing. The idea was nice but it was not the story I knew how to tell, So I decided to start over. There were also a few comments I wanted to reply to;
Heather - I'm not dating anyone who is like Tomas, I don't think we'd get along !
Ariel (pretty name !) - I have been their via lay over but I really did that because I ethnicly Lithuanians have gray eyes.
Kailey (another pretty name) - Not really, this is all so knew to me the only thing I can suggest is to write something you're proud of
SLodger - Fiona Baker has nothing to do with my stories
Shawna - Thanks, you're the best
Penandmouse08 - What is this Law and Order ? I use a pen name so the writing and it's message stands on it's own, this is somewhat like therapy to me. Did you know you can't look up marriage information that involves minors ? Wedding photos are nice and I don't plan to show my face. Joel Baker is nice but a little out there . . .
Did you know people lie about their ages ?
ReplyDeleteIs Tomas supposed to be Catholic, since most Lithuanians are ?
ReplyDeleteDo any of the other characters have a specific ethnicity ? Because Servine and Angeline sound French.
Love your writing ! It's so original !